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Previously in Scipio Metellus, Slaver of Ko-ro-ba
Scipio Metellus shook his head at the amount of dishonesty in the world. Atticus continued.
“One night, the Brothers in Ar
disappeared. They were gone; their stock was gone. There was nothing left. They
were pursued. One was caught and impaled. The other is still at large. The
creditors in Ar, commissioned me to come to Abydos-Thebes and collect their
losses from the Brothers here. I took tarn and came with two apprentices,
cousins of the sister of my former Companion’s uncle. When we arrived, the creditors
here were emptying this House. I have been dealing with the Praetor and creditors
for the last week. There will be little left for any of us. The Brothers here
had fled as well. But there is some hope. Just before I left the Praetor, word
came by tarn that six of the Brothers, their wagons, and their Companion and
families had been captured. There will be some profit from that.”
Scipio Metellus said, “I find it difficult to believe
that they were so dedicated to their Companions that they did not abandon them
and flee farther and more quickly.”
“It was not devotion to their Companions;
it was devotion to their wagons. The wagons had false bottoms, and in the false
bottoms, was some treasure. How much do we not know.”
“Now tell me, my friend, do you
have anything to disclose to me? Some maidens stolen from an impossible tower
perhaps.”
Scipio Metellus deflected the question. He wanted to have Atticus
of Ar in a mellower mood before broaching delicate subjects.
“Tell me more of these captured wagons.
Would the treasure hidden in secret compartments below the floorboards be
enough to cover your losses, and the losses of your friends in Ar.
Atticus of Ar shook his head.
“It would if their were no other creditors.
Yet sadly, there were others who were deceived by the Brothers Hieronymus. As
many of them reside here in Abydos-Thebes, it is difficult to have our claims
heard fairly. And by fairly, of course I mean first. After all, we are of Ar,
and this is a provincial city, allied with Ar and beholden to it.
Yet I have been able to get the
Praetor to a least give our claims equal consideration. Unfortunately, he has
also admitted the small claims of small traders and craftsmen, diluting the
pool of monies available.”
Scipio Metellus took a sip of his Black Wine.
“You might use that to your
advantage. Let the small traders and craftsmen know that it was your
representations for equal treatment that led to their inclusion in the numbers
of those to be compensated. It will gain you much sympathy with the mob of
people who will attend the final hearing. It can be useful to have the mob on
your side.”
Atticus smiled.
“You are indeed a cunning old scoundrel,
Scipio Metellus. But it is a dangerous thing to stir up a mob. I am not sure
that the risk is worth the reward, if the tospit is worth the squeeze. As you
get older, your plans and schemes seem to me to get more involved. I worry that
you might go too far, to your own regret.”
“Funny you should mention that,
Atticus. One of my recent schemes paid off handsomely.”
Scipio Metellus smiled mysteriously. Clearly, he was ready
to start boasting. But now that Atticus had him eager to talk, Atticus changed the
subject. He and Scipio Metellus may be close friends, but they are merchants as
well; each eager for the greater profit. If Atticus could defer talk of any
possible ‘missing maidens’ for a time, Scipio Metellus might give him a better
price. So he changed the subject to one that always affected markets for slaves
and all else on Gor.
“In your travels this spring, did
the early seedlings look good? Were the Peasants hopeful and optimistic of a
good harvest?”
“When have you ever encountered an
optimistic Peasant? During all the years of your life have you ever encountered
a Peasant who was happy and optimistic? A more dour and gloomy set of chaps
there does not exist in any caste of Gor. Even the fishermen are more hopeful.
But the early shoots of crops
looked promising. The seedlings looked healthy and plentiful. More to the
point, the Peasants were not looking to sell their Field Girls, let alone their
daughters. They all seemed to have seed, animals to pull their plows, girls to
weed their fields. The vulo’s eggs were plentiful. And more significantly, not
only were the Peasants not selling girls, slave or free, they all enquired
about buying nebraskas. ‘Do you have any nebraskas to sell Esteemed Slaver?’
they would ask. “ ‘Do you have any mary-annes
to sell, or do you know any of your caste who have them for sale?’”
Atticus of Ar stroked his chin, as he did when pleased. A
prosperous and well-fed City populace was good for his business. He did little
trade in farm girls or in the daughters of Peasants. Peasant girls came on the
market of course, in bad years, as Peasants had to sell their daughters to
purchase seed, but it was a poor market and one that prosperous Slavers like
Atticus and Scipio avoided.
Atticus pursued a related topic.
“Do you know why they are called ‘nebraskas’?,
these farm girls, It is not a term that was used when I was younger. Yet now it
seems to be everywhere in the central plain,”
Next to successfully completing one of his ‘little schemes’,
and boasting of it naturally, Scipio Metellus loved to be consulted as an
expert in his field.
“I found out a few years ago. I was
talking to one of the free traders who run unlicensed voyages of acquisition.”
Atticus interrupted.
“The Priest-Kings have not
sanctioned any such voyages for decades. Communication with the Slave World is
supposed to cut off.”
“So they have, friend Atticus, so
they have. Or so the Initiates tell us. But yet they continue, as things do when
there is profit and beautiful women to be had.”
“I have heard there are dark forces
behind the trade now.” Atticus sounded worried, yet he himself dealt in
Barbarians.
“I haven’t seen any such signs,
just profit,” rejoined his friend.
They sat in silence for a few moments, contemplating the line
between danger and profit. Both men were careful when they could be, yet in
each was, below the crust of respectability, the soul of a pirate. Scipio
Metellus frowned as he recalled something.
“A Friend told me recently that certain
Initiates were taking an interest in my doings, even following me. Not all
Initiates but a few specific ones of the white clad bean-eaters, one in
particular. I have no idea why.”
Atticus snorted. “Perhaps because
you call them bean-eaters when beans are specifically denied them. Such a lack
of respect would upset the White Caste.”
Scipio laughed. “I can more easily
believe they refrain from beans than that they refrain from women, frankly.”
“More seriously, friend Scipio, do
you think they have had word of your caravan scheme. It was successful twice,
but will you try it again?”
“I already have a third attempt in
progress. I hope to reap a good harvest a year from now.”
“Enslaving women at the Sardar
Fairs is strictly forbidden.”
“I don’t exactly enslave them at
the Fair. Of course there are at the Fair a few I persuade to offer themselves
to the Priest-Kings. If they get collared between submitting themselves to the Sardar
and the Sardar gates, that is not really enslaving them. They have already
submitted to the Priest-Kings.”
Atticus shook his head. “That is splitting
some mighty fine hairs. The Initiates would not agree. I think the hair-splitting
you are doing there is finer than the belly hair of an auburn slave. And there
is nothing thinner than that.”
Scipio sat silent after that. He could not dispute that he
was taking great risks with the caravan scheme. The rewards were great though,
and even greater was the fun the scheme gave the old scoundrel. He turned the subject
back into safer channels.
“As to the name ‘nebraskas’ for
sturdy well-fed farm girl slaves, I am told it comes from an area or maybe a
city on the Slave World that is populated almost entirely by Peasants. The women
there are sturdy and strong and well suited to farm labour. Energetic in the
furs as well, above the norm for farm slaves, but above all, good for plowing
and weeding. So all Peasants now want good sturdy strong girls, ‘nebraskas’
despite their place of origin.
“I do not know the origin of 'mary-annes' for the prettiest of the ‘nebraskas’ though.”
In the corner, kneeling patiently to be called upon, the
barbarian kajira, Lesley, stirred.
“Speak slave.” Scipio Metellus was
always observant. It helped him avoid danger and had often gained him much
profit.
“I think Master, that the original
mary-anne was a character in a play, like the ones Boots Tarsk-bit produces. I
did not see it myself, but I have heard it spoken of by other Barbarian slaves,
many from the land of the ‘nebraskas’.
“Speak more.”
“It was a play, or rather series of
plays with stock characters, who were cast ashore on an island. There were two
sailors, one a captain, the other a mighty sailing man: and their passengers.
There was a rich merchant and his companion; and a wise scribe whose ideas
allowed them to live in comfort but who could not come up with a plan that would
allow them to leave their island. There were two slaves, one an auburn kajira,
whose name even meant fire-crotch in the barbarian tongue, and the other was a
farm slave, whose garden fed them all. She was both comely and a ‘nebraska’
and the character was called Mary-anne.
“I never saw it myself; I was above
such cheap comedy when I was a serious free woman, but that is what I was told.”
The two slavers sat cross-legged and finished their Black
Wine. The candles were burning low. Scipio beckoned with his finger, and Lesley
the blonde barbarian crawled forward. She pulled from under the low table a silver
tray, with a decanter and two silver cups. She poured two measures from the
decanter, one into each small cup. Using tongs, she heated the cups and their
contents over the flame of the candle.
Then she served first Atticus as the guest; then her master
Scipio Metellus as the giver of the feast. She held each cup first to her belly,
then to her heart, then kissing the cup, she held it out between both arms, the
unkissed side towards each man. She then knelt in nadu in front of the men,
while Gold Key, the other slave glowered with jealousy in the corner of the
room. Gold Key smiled as Lesley was waved back away from the talking men.
Atticus smiled when Scipio Metellus again began to speak of
the twenty stolen maidens. Both he and Scipio Metellus were merchants, and by
having Scipio speak of the subject directly, Atticus had won a small advantage.
They were friends, but they were merchants.
“I have heard there was a terrible
scandal when all of the girls who were prizes in the competition between Tarn
Hill City and Tarn Hill Port, winners and losers were spirited away from the
Impossible Tower at the Inn at the Ford.”
“I have heard the same,” Atticus
admitted, “I have no idea how it could have been done, or who might have done it.
I have heard that you pointed out to all who asked that your caravan was two
pasangs short of Ford because you lost a wheel on one of your wagons and it
took half a day to fix.
That alibi is a little suspicious
given the well-known efficiency of Longinus of Argentum, your wagon master. Half
a day to fix a wheel when it is know you keep spare wheels and other parts.”
Scipio shook his head. “I was an
surprised as anyone, I assure you. And once the wagon was fixed we were
surrounded at the camping place by the wagons, and carts of other travellers. There was no way we could
move or even leave on foot.”
“It is you having so many witnesses that you
were elsewhere that makes me suspicious. Just because I have known you a long time
and know your tricky nature. That you and your wagon men and your Riders of the
High Thalarion were all accounted for so neatly, makes me wonder how you did
it.”
“The Purple gang was rumoured to
have re-appeared, and a wisp of purple silk was found in the sanctum from which
the twenty maidens disappeared. Or so I have been told,” Scipio added.
He went on. “However, by amazing
chance, I have come into the possession of these women, now branded and
collared. They were sold to me by wandering riders, who claim to have acquired
them from other brigands in purple.”
Atticus ruefully shook his head at such luck.
“You just happened to be offered the
most sought after captives in years. What luck you have. Will the captives
confirm this outlandish story?”
Atticus of Ar smiled at such an outlandish tale. Scipio was
mock-indignant that his word might be doubted.
“Of course, the twenty kajirae will
confirm the story. Kajirae cannot lie to a master. They went to sleep in their
chamber in the Tower, and awakened, stripped and bound in a clearing. Through
inexplicable gaps in their blindfolds, they saw bandits, fearsome bandits
wearing purple silk armbands, just as the Purple Gang were reported to wear.
One at a time, they were branded and collared. Their blindfolds were
re-adjusted. Then they heard a terrible clash of arms. They were hustled away
by other brigands, with green armbands. They saw a few of the Purple Gang on
the ground, with apparently terrible wounds. Those brigands sold them to me.
That is what they know.”
Atticus said nothing, there was nothing to say to such a
story. Scipio went on.
“Obviously, the best market for
such a group of slaves, with such an interesting story is the Central Block in
Ar. They would each compete with the others for the highest selling price. I
would like you to sell them for me on consignment. I am turning north here to
Ko-ro-ba, and as you are returning to Ar, it would be a profitable arrangement
for us both. Shall we say you take 20% of the gross profit?”
Finally, they were bargaining. Atticus made a counteroffer.
“I have no wagons here. I would
have to pay transport to Ar by tarn, that is expensive. Shall we say 25% after
transportation and sales expenses?”
Scipio was mock outraged.
“Twenty-five percent and travel
expenses, and sales expenses. I had my expenses too. You will leave me with no
profit at all. Do you think I did all this for the fun of it?”
“Yes.”
Scipio laughed.
“Well, yes I did, But I still want
my fun to pay for itself. Make me an offer.”
“I will make you two. Twenty per
cent, and I pay the sales and transportation expenses, or,” Atticus paused. “Or
you pay me 30% after sales and transportation expenses, and I let you tell me
the story of how you did it. After all, who else can you tell? The Initiates? The men of Tarn Hill?"
Scipio laughed. He laughed so hard he fell over sideways.
When the Slaver of Ko-ro-ba righted himself, he spat on his hand and held it
out to seal the bargain. The two men shook on the agreement.
“Well he began, it was like this. You presented me with an
impossible challenge, which you knew I would accept, the stealing of twenty
maidens, the prizes in a game of girl catch, ten winners and ten captives to be
enslaved from the Impossible Tower at the Inn at the Ford. I decided to try the
impossible.”
“You recall how you described the
Tower to me: (Sardar Fair IV)
“The Women’s Keep at the Inn is
an old stone watch tower. It was abandoned a century ago and the Inn was built
around the tower. It is four levels and has a cellar. The walls are eight feet
thick at the bottom and three at the top. The cellar has a separate entrance
and does not communicate with the rest of the Tower. There is only one way in
and one stairway between levels. There are no secret ways or stairs; people
have been searching for at least one hundred years. Are you following so far?”
The main floor is a common room
which is entered from the lobby of the Inn; the paga room is across the lobby
in a separate wing. The common room of the Tower at the Inn is only for guards
and male companions of Ladies staying at the Inn. A single stairway leads to
the second level. This is a common sleeping room for Women who cannot afford
better but is still very safe. From the second level a stairway leads to the
third level. At the top of the stairs is an iron door. It is barred from the
inside by the ladies staying on the third level. The bars are heavy beams of
wood that it takes three to four women to lift into place. No one can enter
easily, and one or two traitors inside cannot compromise the safety of the
others. There is a small eating room and separate sleeping rooms on this level.
There is one window, it has an iron shutter that is secured by bolts on the
inside and in any case it overlooks rapids.
The fourth floor is more of the
same, except more exclusive and expensive. On the night they are there, only
the ten Free Maidens from the winning city will be on that floor; along with
the ten captives, not yet enslaved, from the losing city. If they had been
enslaved they would not be permitted on the fourth level. Indeed, only Free
Women may ascend above the first level. There is no way to insinuate any spy or
agent into the tower, no way of forcing the doors before rescue arrives.
The tower has a peaked roof, so
a Tarn cannot be landed upon it; the fourth level’s window overlooks a
courtyard which will be full of Warriors. There is no way to get the twenty
women you see in front of you out of the Tower at the Inn at the Ford.”
“So obviously the first thing to
do was to find allies inside the tower. Just as obviously the way to get inside
any locked door is a golden key. I had made the acquaintance of two Free Ladies
who were openly desirous of gold. Like many with enough, they were greedy for
more. Further I despised their parsimony. Those with gold should be open-handed
with it. I gave them gold, a tarn disk of gold each and a promise of a further
suitable reward following a successful completion of the enterprise.
But that only went so far. The strength
of two women could not unbar the doors, anyway I could not infiltrate any men
into the bottom levels of the Tower. But they could open windows, more of that
anon.
I had no allies on the fourth floor
where the twenty maidens, ten captive, and ten free were to sleep. Their window
overlooked the courtyard where Tarn Hill troops were encamped. What to do. They had to be induced to open the door between their floor, and the floor below where my
allies were.
All in the tower had to be induced to sleep while I secured my prizes..
Then I had to get my prizes away.
Quite a series of problems. I loved it.
The first I solved with the aid of
the best baker on Gor. Andre the Baker. The
problems of tassa powder are twofold. The first is the difficulty of adding it
to food. The second is dosage, how can one be sure how long the effect will last
when one doesn’t know how much wine or paga the victim will consume. I did not
want anyone in the tower oversleeping.
Andre, though is a precision
baker. Unlike others, he does not guess at the measures of ingredients or
measure using cups of dubious accuracy. So if I could, for a consideration, and
for the challenge of the thing, have him add a precisely measured amount of
tassa powder to a precise measure of liquid, and then bake with it, and divide
the pastries such that each piece would induce a four hour sleep in an average sized
women, then the induced sleep would blend into their natural sleep and they
would awake none the wiser.
I provided my allies with pieces enough
for each woman on the uppermost floor as well as each woman on the floor below. So that was
done.
Next, how to get the women out of
the tower. At the fair I had encountered acrobats, cousins named Dromio. They went
ahead and took rooms at the Inn. Because they counterfeited illness, they were
placed on the top floor, across from the tower, to keep their counterfeited
illness away from the other patrons.
The last part of my plan was a troop
of Riders of the High Thalarion. I had ostentatiously paid off a mercenary
troop of twenty such Riders when they had completed their duties escorting me
to the Sardar Fair. Secretly, I engaged them for one last service before they
rode to Victoria to take part in a little war that city is fighting.
On the night in question, when the
Iron Doors on the third and fourth floors were secured, my plan was put into
action. My two allies, the Free Ladies offered pieces of pastry, a special ba-kla-va
by Andre the Baker, already cut and precisely portioned, to the ladies staying on the third
floor. If the other ladies had known my allies better, they would have known
that such generosity, indeed, any generosity was out of their character.
Greed and gluttony, overcame any
suspicion. Such is human nature. The ladies from Tarn Hill, captives and free
alike were also seduced by gluttony. My ladies promised them pieces of
ba-kla-va for all, but sadly the door was barred. After much straining and
heaving, the bars were removed and the free women trooped down to engage in gluttony. My allies said
it was a shame that the captives who were still technically free ladies should not share in
the bounty. It was while my allies were ‘helping’ unchain the captives that one
of them, unhooked tha catch on the window, although leaving it look like it was
still secure.
Once the ba-kla-va and wine party
was over, the Tarn Hill ladies went upstairs, again securing the bars on the
door. The tassa in the pastry taking effect, they went to sleep.
Likewise the ladies on the floor
below sought their couches, my allies leaving out the bottles of wine, so that the
dregs could be tested and found innocent of any tampering.
At the Nineteenth Ahn the acrobatic
Dromios left their attic quarantine rooms by the attic window, and made their
way across the roofs to the Tower. The roofs were no trouble to them, due to
their acrobatic training. They let themselves down by silken ropes to the
window of the fourth floor. Only the yellow moon was up, and it was on the
other side of the tower. Although there was light in the courtyard below, the
window in the tower was shrouded in shadow. They used a wire to open the
insecure window and entered. Capture scent, added to the effect of the tassa
powder, and the ten free and ten captive women were all secured.
But how to get them out of the
Tower? The courtyard below was guarded.
But the Riders of the High Thalarion could
enter the stream under the third floor window, and while men or boats would be
swept away, their beasts would not.
Now you understand while the women
on the third floor also had to be put to sleep. One by one the twenty women were
lowered to the twenty riders, who proceeded upstream for two pasangs. The Captain
of the group took silk scarves from some of the women and laid a false trail of
scent into the forest in the opposite direction dropping them with a purple
scarf and some distance from the Inn. Another scrap of purple silk was left on
the fourth floor.
The acrobats retreated to the fourth
floor and secured and barred the door. They left, as they had come, by the
window, using a thin wire to secure the catch. They just made it back to their
room when the white moon rose and bathed everything in light.
In the morning, the Tarn Hill troops had the ladies on the third floor unbar and open the door. But they could not enter the fourth floor. They pounded and hammered, but no one answered. The door was such that it took hours to force open. The place was empty; all the women were gone.
After much enquiry the women on the Third floor were all cleared of complicity. They had slept through the night and not heard a thing. Their door and window were secured. Likewise the door and window on the fourth floor were secured from inside. It was a mystery.
The rest you know. The women were
stripped, collared, and branded. They were kept blindfolded. Then they heard
the sound of combat, and when they were carried away, they saw ‘victims’, ostensibly
dead. Makeup by a slave I owned, who had been an actress at one time, proved
effective as the twenty slaves were only allowed a quick peek.
Then they were ‘sold’ to me, again
by the Riders wearing disguises. Now they meet their fate on the Central Block
of Ar. The official story of theft by bandits with the real story of the Girl
Catch contest should net a nice profit for us both.”
Atticus laughed as the story ended.
He regretted he could not share it, but that was part of the deal. “There are some loose ends. The Riders might
talk.”
“They are far away fighting in
Victoria. The life expectancy in such combats is low.’
“The acrobats, then?”
“Besides being excellent acrobats,
they are part-time thieves. Not something they will advertise. To ensure their
silence, I gave them the address of an accomplished lady thief to add to their
troup.”
“The two greedy Free Ladies. They
are sure to blackmail you”
“When I made the agreement with
them, I promised them a suitable reward for their aid. We met in the forest two
nights after the affair of the Tower. What more suitable reward for two Free
Women who aided in the abduction of twenty maidens than to be put in the collar
themselves. Tonight, they served the men of my wagons most completely.”

There are some obvious and not so obvious Easter eggs in this chapter. I ask readers not to comment on them or over speculate on upcoming events.
ReplyDeleteThe last third of this chapter is a sort of Gorean Caper Film, a sort of Scipio's Eleven, which may not interest all readers. But sometimes I write solely for my own amusement, so I hope you will indulge me.
DeleteAll the elements were, I think, laid out in the four parts of Scipio at the Sardar Fair.
In making comments, I think it is only fair, at least for the first few days to let readers go back and make the connections themselves instead of laying them out in comments.
If I left any terrible plot holes, reply to my email.
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Delete(1) See point (21) below for potential plot hole.
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ReplyDelete(1) I waited for this chapter, switching between pre-break Barbarian of Gor chapters and your home page. I had just finished a fascinating explanation in Chapter Twelve by Adamus of Trakker’s dinner parties for Free Women, where he assesses the guests and the hostess for slave potential.
(2) I can keep quiet about the Easter Eggs, but where is the line between speculation and over speculation?
(3) I’m not sure why you repeated the entirety of the last two paragraphs from the last chapter, instead of starting with
“Previously in Scipio Marcellus, Slaver of Ko-do-ba
“Atticus explained the fall of the House of the Brothers Hieronymous, finishing with,
,”Just before I left the Praetor, word came by tarn …
…
“Now, tell me my friend, do you have anything to disclose to me? Some maidens stolen from an impossible tower perhaps?”
Scipio Metellus’s deflected …
(4) Scipio discussing the Peasants, paragraph (“But the early shoots …”), 3rd sentence: “More to the point … sell their Field Girls, let along their daughters.” —> …Girls, let alone their daughters.
(5) Atticus considering Scipio’s response, paragraph (“Atticus of Ar stroked … “), 2nd sentence: “A prosperous and well-feed City populace … “ —> … and well-fed City … . 4th sentence: “Peasant girls came … prosperous Slaves like Atticus … “ —> … prosperous Slavers like …
(6) First sentence of Atticus’ dialogue of the related topic: ‘“Do you know why they are called ‘nebraskas’? these farm girls, It is not … —> … called ‘nebraskas,’ these farm girls? It is … . 2nd sentence: ‘“Yet now it … the central plain,”’ —> “… central plain.”
(7) Interruption by Atticus (‘“The Priest-Kings have …”’), 2nd sentence: “Communication with the … is supposed to cut off.” —> … supposed to be cut off.
(8) First line of Scipio’s recall about the Initiates: “A Friend told me …” —-> A friend told me …
(9) Scipio’s excuse for enslaving women at the Sardar fair (‘“I don’t exactly … “‘), 2nd sentence: “Of course there are at the Fair a few a persuade … .“ —> … a few I persuade … . 3rd sentence: “If they get collared between submitting themselves to the Sardar and the Sardar gates … “ —> … themselves to Sardar and the Sardar gates …
(10) Scipio’s explanation of ‘mary-annes’: ‘“I do not know the origin of mary’annes for the prettiest …”’ —> origin of ‘mary-annes’ for the …
tbc
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Delete(11) Lesley’s explanation of the earth play (‘“It was a play …”’), 3rd sentence: “There was a rich merchant … them to live n comfort … .“ —> … live in comfort … . Fifth sentence: “She was both comely … was called Mary-anne.” —> … called Mary-Anne.
(12) Lesley heating paga (“The two slavers sat cross-legged …”), 4th sentence: “She pulled from under the table … a decanter a two silver cups.” —> … decanter and two …
(13) The second paragraph of Atticus’ initial response to Scipio’s impossible tower explanation: ‘That alibi is … “‘ —> “That alibi is … “ (missing beginning quotation marks)
(14) Scipio’s counter to Atticus’ response (“Scipio shook his head … “), 2nd sentence: ‘“I was an surprised as anyone, …”’ —> “I was as surprised … “
(15) Atticus’ rejoinder to Scipio’s counter: ‘“It is so many witnesses that you were elsewhere … ‘ —> “It is that so many witnesses say that you … (two missing words: “that” and “say”)
(16) Scipio’s request to Atticus, 1st sentence: ‘“Obviously, the best market …, with such an interesting story is the Central Block in Ar.’ —> … interesting story, is the Curulean in Ar. (missing comma; Curulean is the best market in Ar according to Assassin of Gor)
(17) Scipio’s reasoning to get into the tower, third paragraph (“I had no allies …”), 4th sentence: “They had to induced to open the door … —> … to be induced …
(18) Solving the sleep problems, third paragraph: “I provided my allies … woman on the upper most floor …” —> … the uppermost floor …
(19) The acrobats, first paragraph, first sentence: “At the Nineteen Ahn the acrobatic Dromios … “ —> At the Nineteenth Ahn …
(20) Third to last paragraph (‘“Besides being excellent acrobats, … “‘), 3rd sentence: ‘To ensure their silence, … add to their troup.”’ —> … their troupe.”
(21) What about Andre the Baker? He knows he baked tassa powder into the pastries.
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8. Friend is capitalized because Scipio is emphasizing that it is a true Friend, but one he will not name.
Delete16. They will be sold not just in the Curelean, but from the Central Block in the Curelean. Scipio is using Slavers' shorthand there.
21. Andre has a new technique for 'special clients' Bakers are famously secretive about their recipes.
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Delete(1) Thank you.
(2) Have you heard from BDSMLR?
(3) I’ll hold off on making connections for a few days.
(4) Pending a review of Scipio’s at the Sardar Fair, you did a masterful job of creating an impossible tower and solving it.
vyeh
I completed the form for your invitation and forwarded it to them. I have had trouble logging in there in the past three days
DeleteThank you Tracker. I was wondering! Ingenious.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I had fun writing it. I wanted to write a bit of a caper story, but with lots of Gorean themes, so it would have wider appeal.
DeleteLove the reference to Gilligan's Island
ReplyDeleteMighty sailing man ..
Name means Fire Crotch
Mary Anne was from Kansas.
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Being from Kansas would make Mary Anne a superior type of nebraska. Kansas is less flat, more curvy.
DeleteThank you for enjoying the chapter
Well done. And the Easter Eggs well laid
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ReplyDelete(1) In Sardar Fair IV, Scipio says ‘to Atticus, “When I capture all of them, all the prizes from the contest, will you sell them for me in Ar?” Atticus nodded. The two men clasped forearms …’ Atticus asks, ‘“Now tell me, my friend, do you have anything to disclose to me? Some maidens stolen from an impossible tower perhaps?” Scipio deflected the question. He wanted to have Atticus of Ar in a mellower mood before broaching delicate subjects.’
(2) Initially Scipio offers Atticus “20% of the gross selling profit.” Atticus counters “25% after transportation and sales expenses.” Atticus made two more counteroffers, “Twenty per cent and I pay the sales and transportation expenses, or … you can pay me 30% after sales and transportation expenses, and I let you tell me the story of how you [stole the twenty maidens from the impossible tower]? … Scipio … spat on his hand and held it out to seal the bargain. The two men shook on the agreement.”
(3) Let x = gross profit = Central Blocks sales price - auction commissions and fees, y = sales and transportation expenses and z = the value to Scipio of telling the story. Then Scipio’s initial offer is 20% times x. Atticus initial counteroffer is 25% times (x - y). His two further offers are 20% times x and [30% times (x - y)] - z. Then the first of Atticus’ further offers is the same as Scipio’s initial offer. Economically, the second further offer is 5% more net than the first counter offer.
(4) For the pleasure of boasting, Scipio will pay more than the initial counteroffer, which he declines saying that the counteroffer “will leave me with no profit at all.” Hearing the story also has value for Atticus since he asks initially for the story. Ideally, the negotiation should go: Scipio: 20% times x; Atticus: 25% times (x - y); Scipio: decline; Atticus: 20% times x and “you tell me the story …;” Scipio: “spat on his hand and held it out …; “two men shook to…” especially in light of Scipio wanting Atticus in a mellower mood in point (1) above.
(5) Note Atticus’ initial counteroffer both increases the percentage and reduces his expenses. The usual pattern would be to reduce the percentage and the expenses.
(6) First paragraph of Scipio’s story, first sentence: ‘“Well, he began, it was like this.”’ —> Well, he began, “It was like this.”
(7) In Slaver (2), the guard at Abydos-Thebes congratulates Scipio “on the theft of the Thirty Virgins at the Inn at the Ford.” Why is Scipio being held responsible despite many witnesses placing him two pasang away from the Inn at the time of the theft?
(8) After reviewing Sardar Fair, I conclude you masterfully created and solved an impossible puzzle and the story holds together.
vyeh
Scipio was blamed for the tower abduction because he was at the Fair, and it was the sort of thing he would do even if there was no evidence. Sometimes a reputation is a good thing, somethings it is a case of 'give a dog a bad name....'
ReplyDeleteHe doesn't want to get his accomplices into trouble, or reveal his methods. Maintaining a mystery is good for business.
So he paid a price for the pleasure of boasting, and made Atticus a good deal.
Great chapter. I can imagine the shock of the Free Women ‘winners’ when they woke up and discovered that they had been captured. Loved the Gilligans Island reference and Ginger.
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