(edited December 15, 2025)
.Stories tie back to Stories on EmmaOfGor.Blogspot.com in particular Steel Worlds Inc by Emma of Gor and Banks of the Bighorn by Tracker, and The Paga Diaries by Arizona Wanderer.
Recent Posts:
Downcast Eyes (3) An Arlinga story by Peony D Beckside.
Tales from Drysdale House (5) by Tracker
Tales from Drysdale House (4) by Tracker
Downcast Eyes (2) An Arlinga story by Peony D Beckside
Scipio Metellus (7) and Anthropoligist of Gor (0) a post that is both the end of the current Scipio series and the preface to a new story starting some time next year.
Vignettes (3) Submission is Curiosity
The Paga Diaries (27) by Arizona Wanderer, The Auction of Dina
Authors crave feedback on their stories. Let us know what works and what doesn't and what you think.
Hello Master!
ReplyDeleteI knew some weeks ago that you'd resumed posting here but I wanted to remain quiet until I'd had a chance to read all the new material. And I couldn't do that, obviously, until I'd revisited the first five chapters... which I have now done.
What a treat it is to see the tales appearing again! The new story is a lot of fun, and I will now follow it faithfully. I particularly enjoyed the passing reference to Agnes Morison-Atherton. And since Easter is nearly upon us (and I do like eggs)... is there any connection between the Drysdales who built Patrick's San Francisco house (and later relocated to Beverly Hills) and Jed Clampett's banker?
Just curious. I know I'm not supposed to be... but I am. :-)
Pipa may have a piece, a small piece of Ba-kla-va for finding that egg. Yes Drysdale and Hathaway in the story were references to the other Drysdale and Hathaway. I am pleased that you found the stories of interest. I am working away at the next chapter for Friday, hoping to have it ready.
DeleteIf you enjoy the Illustrations that TroyMD is providing any feedback would be appreciated.
Some time ago, you wrote and illustrated a short stand alone chapter for Emma. Pending her return let me know if you have anything else you would care to submit.
If anything in a story prompts an illustration, again I would publish anything you care to send.
Lots of new kajirae coming on Friday.
good to see you back Pipa.
DeleteI have taken inspiration from ya Tracker and finally started posting the rest of that story I started a while back. Looking forward to seeing what happens next in your story
ReplyDeleteWhere are you posting it?
DeleteMy page is called Paladen's Tales and Stories. I am still trying to figure out how to find or look up other blogs on here. I stumbled across Emma's page some how a long time ago and only started to venture out recently
DeleteTal Pipa Nice to hear from you again Love to see more exploits of the twins in search of their missing cousins
ReplyDeleteThanks (to all) for the warm welcome!
ReplyDeleteFor those who care, yes, I have dredged up all my old notes regarding Tuesday's and Wednesday's quest, first time I've reviewed that stuff since Emma's last visit to her blog. And with some luck, I may be able to produce some new material worth looking at. :-)
As I recall, Tuesday and Wednesday almost found themselves on their way to Gor too. I'm curious to see just who sent them those slave anklets since they have made themselves known to a few different slavers
Delete@paladin
DeleteI've seen on your blog that you wanted some comments about suggestions on your stories.
Just so you know, unlike Tracker's blog, we can't post anonymously on your blog.
And with current fashion on NSFW censorship, I need to log in with my Gmail account that's been verified with my passport to access both your and Tracker's blog.
And for your blog only, i'm forced to comment with this Gmail account that has my real name on it. Hence i don't.
Sorry to hear that Tracker is under the weather. Hope that he gets feeling better soon
ReplyDeleteLikewise.
DeleteVery happy for your return, and relieved you feel better!
ReplyDeleteThanks Tracker, not just for hosting my story, but also for finding such perfect pictures for this second chapter.
ReplyDeleteIt is a pleasure to host the story. I am glad that the illustrations I found were suitable.
DeleteI had not realized that this was your work. Nicely done. And if I can help let me know.
DeleteAny news on the Emma front. Been year since heard of her
ReplyDeleteTracker:
ReplyDeleteThank you for marking my comment to The Paga Diaries (22) as Not Spam. I tried posting the comment a dozen times. It would stick for a minute if I exit and return, but no more than a minute. I don’t understand the algorithm that decides my comment is spam. I use my Google account and I have posted in your blog before. Since Arizona Wanderer started posting additional chapters hours after my request, I wanted to give him a couple of specific suggestions, even though the story was excellent without the suggestions.
vyeh
Tracker:
ReplyDeleteIn the 24 October edition of Blog Schedule and Contributions, “The Paga Diaries …” is in smaller type than “Tales from Drysdale House …” and “The Tarncot …” You can fix it when you update the schedule for chapter three of Verna’s Journey.
vyeh
Tracker:
ReplyDelete(1) I reread the first 20 chapters of The Paga Diaries. Thank you for encouraging Arizona Wanderer to continue after almost every chapter and for inviting him in May to finish the Diaries on your blog.
(2) I came to your blog in August to finish After the Bighorn since it was part of Emma’s universe. I am a science fiction fan, not a fan of westerns. I like sword wielding warriors, not cowboys. You’ve put a lot of effort into your writing, you edit your writing and you keep to a schedule, all commendable.
(3) I originally posted in your blog at the end of September when I saw a continuity error in a story borrowing characters and concepts from Emma. I added a short paragraph introducing myself. To my amazement, Arizona Wanderer responded to my wish for more Diaries. The knowledge that there was a second reader pushed him over the tipping point.
(4) Thank you for the tremendous work formatting and publishing two other weekly writers. While I followed Black Beauty, I’ve been blown away by Verna’s Journey. Vita was somewhat fascinating as the programmed tool of Udumi Ayeola; Verna is memorizing. She chooses the forest over Marlenus, talks to tarns, enslaves a warrior after dropping her weapon and drinks in a Paga tavern wearing animal skins, a visible brand and earrings. Crespus Tartarus, warrior of Ar, bored by the naked kajirae around them, talks with her and wants to continue the conversation in Ar,
(5) Udumi Ayeola is one of the few surviving characters of Olga Turlovna’s Daughter of Gor, kidnaps Eric (later Emma) Anderson in chapter one of Mistress of Gor and is a Kurii agent in London. Perhaps Wyandotte Frick or Patrick Masters will encounter her.
vyeh
Tracker:
ReplyDelete(1) Look at points (1) and (5) of my review of Flashing Eyes. Two groups of words have a larger font size than the rest of the story.
vyeh
Tracker:
ReplyDelete(1) I just saw your email. I’ve been busy since 6:30 am EST reviewing an early copy of The Paga Diaries (28) AW emailed me. I read Emma’s site in July and found your site because you posted numerous times in the comments to Emma’s site. At first, I simply noted them, but eventually the desire for content led me to check out your site. Although courtroom dramas are not my genre, I knew your writing from Emma’s site.
(2) It’s good that you analyze your site. Emma is surprised that she got almost 2 million views during her 14 month break. Her site comes up second for “Gor fan fiction” Number One has forty entries. I started to read one entry. It was okay, but AW, Paladin, Pauline and you are better. Some of the entries have a warning NOT to read if you are a Gor fan. Fiction Mania had a flag for authors to indicate whether a work was complete. I suspect some of Emma’s readers only read completed works. And she has a lot of “completed” even if Slaver of Gor ends with Amicia Katares naked and alone in the wilderness.
(3) I am delighted to provide feedback. I enjoyed reading comment sections sometimes more than Emma’s post. I was going to review Tarl of Turin when Emma returned. I hope some of my comments might be interesting to future readers.
vyeh