A Mere Fleabite
Peony D. Beckside
Chapter One: Leg-work
I’m not supposed to. Chief Brainerd had made it quite clear that I, Detective Hannah Greenwood, was to hand over all documentation with regard to the attempted abduction of Ginger Stowell, by the self-professed slave Alyena and as yet unidentified accomplices. The likelihood that Alyena’s owner is the one who gave her the order to abduct Ms Stowell and/or to collect her is strong, but not yet confirmed. Chief Brainerd also ordered me to wipe all related computer files.
Damn that, for a lark!
I was so mad at his high-handed attitude that I quickly photocopied
everything and copied all computer files onto a memory stick, before appearing
to comply with his demands.
I mean, it’s so out of character. A man as powerful as the Police Chief of such
a city as New York, doesn’t just drop everything to rush and free a suspect
that’s been caught ‘dead to rights’, and to attempt to cover-up the
investigation! Who is, was this Alyena
woman anyway?! That she’s completely
deluded with her tales of slavery and another planet, or is a brilliant
actress, is clear. Sure, she is good looking, perhaps even stunning, but then
since I’m not a lesbian I can’t see her that way. Is she some kind of celebrity that I’ve never
actually heard of? But then, I’m not
interested in the current celebrity-driven culture that we seem to live in.
No, clearly Chief Brainerd’s been ‘got-at’, bribed or
blackmailed somehow. That disappoints me
intensely! I always thought of him as an
honest man. If someone as high as he can
be compromised, then how high and how widespread is the corruption in the
Police Department? Graft goes on, of
course. Even I’ve been offered bribes
from time to time. So far I have managed
to resist such temptations. Call me
naive if you must, but I’ve always only ever thought that such was in the lower
ranks of ‘New York’s Finest’. I thought
the upper echelons to be better than that!
So bribery or blackmail?
The first, I suspect. I was
looking out of the window as the Chief, the Alyena woman and that good-looking
man introduced to me as Professor Morbius...
Oh stupid me! I’ve
just realised! Morbius! That ancient Science Fiction film Forbidden
Planet, with it’s ‘flying saucer’ space-ship, had a Dr Morbius - played by
Walter Pigeon, as a chief character.
More than a coincidence, I suspect given that Alyena talked about having
been abducted to a clearly fictitious planet, and having been a slave since the
1920’s. Perhaps the man was ‘taking the
pee’ by calling himself that. It
obviously isn’t his real name!
Ah yes, I’d been looking out of the window as the three of
them left. This ‘Professor Morbius’
definitely gave Chief Brainerd something before getting into a big long
limousine. What he gave the Chief, I’ve
no idea. I can’t believe it was
money. To bribe the Chief would take
more than a handful of dollar bills, even high denomination ones.
I was quick enough to get the licence-plate of the
limousine. It’s registered to a Steel
World Inc. with offices in the downtown business district round Wall
Street. So far I’ve not been able to get
a clear picture of what business Steel World are into.
I’ve been working on this case on my own time, calling in
favours when necessary. When I do get to
the bottom of this case, it’s my hope that I can use it to pull down that
pompous and clearly crooked Chief Brainerd.
Who knows, it might be my passport to a significant promotion. At the
very least it will show that I have integrity and can’t simply be swatted like
a fly by the higher-ups.
I wish that I’d been able to question this Alyena some more.
I sense that trying to crack her out of the delusion that she is and has
been a slave for a long time, is not the way forward. She’s so deeply into this fanciful story that
on balance, I’m sure she does actually believe it to be reality. There is a real danger when confronting
fantasists is that you can drive them deeper into their psychosis just as
easily as waking them up from such.
No, the way to have questioned Alyena, was in what she could
see through the windows of wherever her base is. By triangulating which of the city’s
skyscrapers she could see, finding at least the district where she lives, is
possible.
Sure she could lie, but it would soon be possible to
determine if she was trying to misdirect. That in itself would clarify whether
she is simply acting the naive and unworldly slut, or playing us for mugs. The one thing about Alyena is that she doesn’t
seem to be reluctant to answer questions; it’s just that her answers confuse
because of their total improbability.
That hope however is academic now, thanks to Chief Brainerd’s
intervention.
I did consider putting on a business suit and going
undercover as some kind of sales-person to Steel World Inc. That option is effectively on hold. How can I talk-up a good line of patter and
intelligently pitch a sales idea to them until I know what they sell, buy, or
invest in? They don’t appear in any
commercial directories. They don’t even
appear to have an internet website. I
use several different search engines to try and find something about this
company. Not one pulled up any
information at all. I mean, how can any
organisation function, or even survive, in this day and age without a
website. If they are using a different
name, then why register the vehicle, have an office, in this name. The New York Department of State has their
ultimate corporate headquarters in Lichtenstein. That alone is a bit suspect. Lichtenstein is a major centre for hiding ‘crooked
money’. Is Steel World engaged in money
laundering? Is that what they do? I can find no turnover figures anywhere, that
in itself is a bit dodgy. I’d like to
know about their tax situation, but I am reluctant to ask yet, in case such
enquiries get back to the Chief. Getting
that kind of information would have to be done at a higher level, and I’m still
looking for someone who can, and is willing to swing this.
As yet, it’s almost as if the company does not exist. It’s got fancy offices, but no sign that it
actually does anything. I suspect that
it’s some kind of ‘front’ for organised crime.
If that’s the case, I’ll need to be very careful indeed.
For that matter, where does Alyena fit in? She claims to be the slave of one Kyril
Flavius, yet she is collected by this Professor Morbius with the help of Chief
Branerd. She and this Morbius guy drive
off in a car owned by Steel World? What’s
the connection?
I call a colleague I know on the ‘organised crime’
section. We had a brief affair before he
moved out of the precinct house and into his present job.
“Morning George.”
“Hannah? Lovely to
hear from you. You are well, I trust?”
“Yes, George. Thanks
for asking.”
“To what do I owe the pleasure of this call?”
“Steel World Inc….”
I give the address of their offices.
“What do you know about them? Are they on your radar? Are they a cover for one of the drug cartel’s
or a mafia front?”
“You know that I can’t divulge that kind of information.”
“Not even to me?
They may be implicated in a kidnapping.”
“Interesting… I
can’t say that they have come up before, in connection with any of the ‘nasties’
we try to keep tabs on. Should we be
watching this company, Hannah?”
“I’d rather you didn’t, at least not officially. There is the potential of Police corruption
at a high level. I shouldn’t even be
asking. I’ve been told to drop this
case, but you know me. Tenacious. I don’t
like my cases being ‘whitewashed’.”
“If that’s the case, Hannah, then watch your back
carefully. You’re a good cop. It’d be a shame for you to be suspended or
worse over what it is you’re investigating.”
He pauses.
“I’ll tell you what.
I won’t dig into this company as such, but if I hear of anything
regarding them, I’ll let you know on the Q.T.[1] If you find anything that you think will be
of interest to me, you’ll let me know?”
“Definitely.
Thanks George.”
“Dinner, next week, sometime?”
“You’re a lovely man, George, but please, let’s not
rehash the past.”
George laughs.
“A man can try!
Keep well, Hannah.”
“You too, George.”
I walk past the front of the office building. At a desk, though I can’t see all of her,
there is a beautiful-looking woman wearing what looks like the same kind of
skimpy dress that Alyena had worn, in light blue though in this case. I can’t be sure at that distance, but it
looks as if she might be wearing a similar kind of collar to the one that
Alyena wore; one that is locked on. I
debate going in, pleading ‘urgently needing to go’, and asking to use their
staff restroom. I’ll save that one for
another occasion.
There’s a small diner across the road, with a window view
onto the street. The car I’m using is
parked a few yards up the street, on a meter.
It doesn’t matter if the meter reports a parking violation, the vehicle
registration is listed as ‘Police’ with ‘ParkNYC’ so there’ll be no charge or
fine to pay.
Shortly before five PM a limousine, the same one as collected
Alyena, in fact, pulls up outside the Steel World offices. A chauffeur gets out and holds the door open
for a striking African or Caribbean woman.
I abandon the dregs of my coffee and get to my car in time to
follow. I hold back a couple of
vehicles, so as to avoid being seen to be following.
Damn! I lose them at
the beginning of 1st Avenue when the car in front of me stops for a
red light. Going uptown, hmmm. Sadly, there’s an awful lot of ‘Uptown’. Perhaps there’ll be other opportunities to
see where this woman goes.
I consider going back to the Station House and requesting
traffic-cam data to try and track the limo.
No, I’m going to have to do this the old-fashioned way. I don’t want to leave a trail of what I’m
doing, in case Chief Brainerd is checking up on me. There’s any number of other reasons, other
cases that I can use to explain me ‘working the street’.
It’s been a long day.
I return to my apartment. I open
a bottle of wine and begin to cook a simple meal. Something’s wrong! I don’t know what it is. I have an odd feeling, a sense of violation.
Before I became a cop, I’d been burgled.
It’s that same sense of invasion, of my space, of my privacy. Has someone been in my apartment? I can’t pin down what it is that’s spooking
me. There’s no obvious signs of things having been moved, searched, etc. I shrug this odd feeling off. Without some
indication of change within the apartment, it has to just be me being fanciful. I think back on Alyena’s conversation and the
implications of it. I dismiss the idea
that those involved with the attempted kidnap of Ginger Stowell are
investigating me.
I mean, it’s too soon after the release of Alyena for whoever
it is that’s involved to know where I live.
For obvious reasons, where Police officers live is kept highly
confidential! And, for that matter, why
is it only here in the apartment that I got that weird feeling. I’m not being followed, I’m pretty sure of
that. I’ve been a cop for long enough to
get a sense of knowing when I’m being followed.
That sense has saved my life on more than one occasion in the past. If someone is following me, they must be
experts for me to not sense it.
Naah. It’s nothing!
It’s been two days since I ‘lost’ the dark woman in the limo,
and I’m no further forward. Frustration
is not something that I take well to. I’m
clearly not getting anywhere tonight. I
decide to go home. Perhaps I’ll have more luck tomorrow.
I live close enough to the station house that I can walk to
and from my office. I don’t have a car
of my own. If I did I could park it in
the Police parking-lot during the day, but finding a regular parking spot close
to my apartment block is a nightmare, hence it’s easier to walk. If I need to go out of town, I hire.
Fortunately this is a lovely and warm summer evening. I feel a sting in the side of my neck. A bee,
no doubt. Little more than an annoying
flea bite. I reach up to swat it. It isn’t a bee sting, it’s a dart. I feel the feathers, but don’t have the
strength to pull it out. I know that I’m
falling, but cannot stop myself. I’m not
out-cold. I can see and hear everything
that’s going on. I just can’t move. I’m paralysed! I make to cry out, but my lips and even my
vocal cords won’t obey me. I can swivel
my eyes but that’s about all I’m capable of.
A man approaches me, clearly with the intention of
helping. Rare enough in New York City.
Usually if one falls down, no-one helps, they just walk by.
Inwardly, I sardonically laugh; though I recognise the
seriousness of my predicament. The man
is the so-called Professor Morbius! I
feel him surreptitiously pull the dart from neck and pocket it. I hear him issue a command. I shouldn’t be surprised, but am. The recipient of the order is that Alyena
bitch!
“Call an ambulance, Alyena!”
Other people are now starting to take notice.
“I’m a Doctor. She’s
fine! I’ll take care of her.”
Sure he will! I so
want to protest, but can’t!
The onlookers move away.
I hear the sound of a siren. An
ambulance pulls up. Two men get
out. Despite me trying desperately to
shake off the drug that’s pole-axed me, I am lifted onto a stretcher and
strapped to it. I and the stretcher are
slid into the back of the ambulance and the door is shut. I know that I’m caught and there’s nothing I
can do to save myself, to free myself!
This is like something out of the movies.
One of the abductors, the so-called ambulance man injects
something into my arm. I try desperately
to remain awake, but the anaesthetic has me.
I remember no more.
Chapter Two: Reassessment Of The Recent Past
I’m rather groggy.
That changes instantly. I cannot
believe what my eyes are telling me. The
utter awfulness of my situation drags a shriek out of me unbidden.
Bars! Right in front
of my face! I raise myself onto hands
and knees. From this position I cannot
raise my head any more. A cage! I look around. Yes, the bars are all around me, only the
surface below me being metal sheet. I’m
locked in a cage! Like an animal! I consider if this is simply a nightmare, but
if it is it’s the most believable dream I’ve ever had.
Nightmare it is, but no dream. A real-life ‘honest to god’ reality of a
nightmare. I’m convinced! I really am locked in a cage.
I examine the cage, every inch of it. The bars are strong, it’s firmly welded at
all the joints. The door is equally
firm. The hinges and locking hasp are
seriously heavy-duty. I’ll not be able
to break the cage, but then what would be the purpose of a cage that the
incumbent could escape from? The lock is
a standard, but expensive padlock. I
wonder if even bolt-cutters would be able to shear it. Not that I’ve got bolt-cutters, or the space
to use their full leverage. There’s a
hole in the floor at the back of the cage.
The hole seems to hang over a channel that has running water flowing
through it. I have to assume that it’s
for peeing and pooing through. The
channelled stream carrying our wastes away to a sewer somewhere. A way out, even if filthy? Not a way out of the cage, as the hole in the
floor is too small, but a way out of this imprisoning chamber?
I become aware of other aspects of my illegal
incarceration. I’m naked. Absolutely stark-naked. Not a stitch of clothing, none of my albeit
usually sparse jewellery. Jewellery? I do have a metal ring round my throat. From that, appends at the front a small tag,
something rather like the tag on a dog’s collar. Do they think that I’m some kind of animal: a
dog, perchance? I tug at, twist, force
this band of metal. I cannot remove it
from my neck. Vain, I suppose to think
that I might. Whoever put it there
surely knows that it’s staying right where it is.
For that matter, who are ‘They’, the ones who’ve locked me in
this cage. I have a horrible feeling
that I know!
As my brain is assessing that, I look around beyond the
bounds of my cage. My cage!? Not my cage, the cage I’ve been immured
in. There are some twenty or so similar
cages lining the walls of the room. Each
seems to have an occupant, a woman, naked and with a virtually identical metal ring
encircling her throat.
I call out to the caged woman opposite me, but in reality to
all of them, any of them.
“Have you any idea where we are? Any ideas as to how to escape?…”
Stupid question, I know.
If they did they’d have used their idea to attempt escape.
“Anyone know who it is who’s got us? How often do the guards check up on us?”
The woman in the cage to my right shushes me. She dares a whispered
“Talking’s forbidden!”
before shrinking back as far as her cage allows her. It’s as if she’s afraid that even those two
words might bring some kind of retribution down on her. The supine nature of the women annoys me.
“What are you?
Sheep?”
It’s clear from their silence and body language that they are
all terrified of breaking some kind of rule or taboo,
I shrug to myself. If
they aren’t prepared to talk to me, to help, to seek a way out of this
predicament, then fuck ‘em!
I set to, mentally listing the things that I need to do, to
know, to escape this trap. In doing so,
I can attempt to put a plan in place to circumvent the obstacles. Of course, first on the list is ‘how do I get
out of this cage’. Since I can’t break
the lock, how do I get a guard to unlock the cage? Having the cage unlocked, how do I wriggle
out quickly enough to do sufficient damage to the guard before he, I’m assuming
it’s a ‘he’, manages to apply some other form of restriction on me? Can I be ready to seize the initiative, when
they do take me out of this cage for whatever reason they have in mind? You get the point. Until that potential opportunity arises, it’s
all speculation of course.
I do however resolve to keep an eye out, noting times and
patterns regarding such things as when we are fed? if and when we are allowed
to bathe? when is ‘lights-out’ time if there is such a thing, etc.?
I wonder if, should an opportunity present itself, if in
escaping, I should attempt to free these other women, these sheep? It might be academic, but having our captors
running around trying to recapture several people at once, might make my escape
a little easier?
Whether escape is possible at all, or not, keeping mentally
active, alert and optimistic is no bad thing.
I’m dozing; there being little enough else to do. Being caged for any length of time is
stultifying at best.
There’s a thump on the bars.
I jerk awake. How have I let
myself be so inattentive as to not notice a jailer entering the room? I castigate myself for that lack of
observation.
It’s Morbius! Or at
least the man who chooses to use that obvious pseudonym.
With him, heeling him is that doormat of a woman, Alyena.
“Alyena, kneel in ‘tower’[2], this
woman is nominally a free-woman, for now at least.”
I choose sarcasm.
“Why, good morning, Professor Morbius! Or is it afternoon? How lovely of you come and visit me? Can I get you anything, a cup of tea perhaps?”
He laughs
“Good to see you haven’t lost your sense of humour,
Hannah. I may call you that, may I?”
He offers with equal irony.
I note that Alyena, kneeling, has her cheek up against this man’s calf.
She has a look of trust, even adoration on her face. This is her ‘Master’, the one who’s name is
incised into the collar that the self-proclaimed slave wears. I switch to contempt.
“I take it that you are the owner of that ‘thing’…”
I point
“...and that you are the Kyril Flavius named on the
collar locked round her neck?”
My contempt is not at Alyena, or at least most of it isn’t,
it’s at the man for reducing her to being such a thrall.
“Now be polite Hannah.
One day you too will kneel lovingly at the feet of your Master.”
My turn to laugh, but it has a bitter edge to it. Despite my bravado, I fear as a woman, that
he may one day be right.
“Never! Not in a
month of Sundays!”
“As ostensibly a free-woman, it is your privilege to
insult one seemingly ‘below your station’, and Alyena must accept your
insult. However I am not so
unsophisticated as to not understand that your insult was also aimed at
me. Insulting those ‘above your station’
is not always wise. I would advise you
to keep a civil tongue.”
The man reaches for something out of my sight below the
cage. I screech in pain! The whole cage has suddenly become
electrified! I very nearly lose control
of my bowels. The pain stops!
“I trust you will heed my warning, Hannah? There’s another setting, where I can give the
same or more to every cage in this room.
I should imagine that each and every girl…”
I note him using the insulting diminutive girl, for the women
imprisoned here.
“...will remember when you get to your destination, if
you cause them pain here.”
The implied threat is clear.
Some amelioration of my tone is called for.
“What is my destination then, Mr Flavius?”
“You already know, Hannah, you just don’t believe
it. You are going to the planet of Gor.”
Too right, I don’t believe it. It’s just a fantasy land in some misogynistic
pulp-fiction books.
“When you interviewed Alyena she told you no lies. She is not permitted to do so. Nor is she allowed to use dumb insolence when
questioned by free-persons. It is not
her place to obfuscate, even when telling as much as she did was to our
detriment. Lying for her is seen as more
heinous than telling an exact and literal truth. Gor exists.
Alyena has spent most of her life there, as you will.”
Is it possible!? Can
the Gor stories be real autobiographies?
“That you are being sent there is not just that we don’t
want you buzzing around investigating our business. You are not displeasing of appearance. You do have a beauty of your own. Recognise it.
Doing so will help you adjust to your new life. Fortunately for you, the aesthetic tastes of
Gorean men are more diverse than those of Earth men. After training, you should fetch a reasonable
price when sold from a block.”
“Sold!? Like an
animal.”
“Yes, of course.
How else do you think Masters obtain their slaves? The majority are sold and bought. For your information also, a slave on Gor is
for legal purposes an animal.”
I’m horrified.
“I think, Hannah, that you should begin to learn how to
address those above you as you will need to on Gor. You call and acknowledge all free men as ‘Master’
and all free women as ‘Mistress’. You may until you are transported use the
Earth words. However upon arrival, the
Gorean words are respectively ‘Dominus’ and ‘Domina’.”
I may be shocked, but I’m not stupid.
“But if I use those words, that’s an acknowledgement of
acceptance that I’m a slave. I’m not!”
“I fear very much that your transition into your slavery
will be very hard for you. On Gor, all
barbarians as Earth people are called, at least all the woman are by legal
definition slaves. They have no home stone…”
I don’t fully understand that reference.
“...There is no place for you as a vigili, a Police
officer. There is no place for your
feminist thinking. The only value, the
only purpose you have is as a woman. All
other roles are irrelevant to you.
Forget about equality. You will
be the biological complement of men, not their social equal. Gorean men will not let you be anything other
than a woman, all woman. If you wish to survive you will have to learn how to
be the very best, most desirable woman you can.
Whilst the most honoured women of Gor are the free-women, the most
desirable and desired, lusted after, are female slaves. When awakened, barbarian slave girls, as
Earth women are described, are deemed to be among the hottest and most sexually
responsive of all slave sluts. If you
would have a rich and powerful Master, and having such will be to your benefit,
then you would do well to surrender to and cultivate the most abject of sexual
surrenders.”
I am horrified at this litany. It flies in the face of everything that I
feel that I am. That is not me! I’m not some lascivious little harlot that’s
got no purpose in life but to crawl to a man and beg him to fuck me! No, definitely not me! I shudder at the thought… or is a shiver…?
I have no lesbian tendencies whatsoever, but I have fought
all my life for a woman’s right to be equal or better than men in
everything. The thought of being reduced
to being a mere toy, a plaything, a sexual doll, I find repugnant. But do I, in my heart of hearts, lie to
myself? The thought of laying down the
struggle of competing with men is seductive.
Can I, instead of trying to hold my own, surrender my very self to total
femininity. Wouldn’t that be the total
surrender of my very soul? Can I
figuratively, and perhaps literally, lie back and become someone’s love-slave,
sex-slave if you like, even if such requires me to be complicit in my own
submission to a Master? The thought
frightens, but yet it also excites.
“Bon Voyage, Hannah.
Oh, by the way, arresting Alyena didn’t save that Ginger Stowell woman
from being collected for her own enslavement.
She’s in that cage over there.”
The other woman looks up in interest upon hearing her own
name mentioned.




Peony D. Beckside:
ReplyDelete(1) Tracker lists your name without a period after the middle initial. You use a period THIS time. (You didn’t for the two parts of Time Changes Everything.) I don’t blame Tracker. At this point, I check your name very carefully to see which variant you’re using. I’m intrigued with the parenthetical “A Time Changes Everything Story.” I’d certainly like to know how the bumbling Goreans put English on a collar where anybody could read it and how they bumbled so Alyena was caught. “A Mere Fleabite” — could that refer to Alyena being caught?
(2) The first picture, of the building with “STEEL WORLD INC. 345 PARK AVENUE”, is interesting. In reality, it is the Blackstone Building, where Shane Tamara killed 4 people last July. In the Emmaverse, it would be interesting if a PK agent killed 4 employees of Steel World Inc. The first paragraph makes clear the point of view is Detective Greenwood and that it starts before she is caged in the House of Three Moons. It will be interesting to see her perspective on Alyena’s case.
(3) A police detective would not refer to “Alyena’s owner” since slavery isn’t recognized in the United States. She would refer to “Kyril Flavius, the name on her collar.”
(4) The fourth paragraph about the lack of corruption at the highest levels is factually wrong. Unfortunately, Thomas Dolan, the former interim Police Commissioner, filed a lawsuit last July charging Eric Adam’s, the former mayor and a former police captain, with running the NYPD as a corrupt, racketeering enterprise; Edward Caban, former Police Commissioner, resigned in 2025 after allegations of selling high-level promotions for $15,000; and Kevin Taylor, a former NYPD official, was charged by federal officials with accepting bribes to steer city contracts. Obviously, Detective Greenwood would be familiar with police scandals in the newspapers. As a resident of New York City, I wish the upper echelons were the way Detective Greenwood believes!
(5) 345 Park Avenue is not “downtown.” The street sign in the first picture is 52nd St., which is clearly “midtown.” Just Tracker’s luck to encounter a reader who used to work both around Wall Street and midtown Manhattan.
(6) Paragraph describing “Lichtenstein”: “Lichtenstein” —> Liechtenstein (2 places)
(7) Paragraph during conversation between Detective Hannah Greenwood and George: (‘“I’d rather you …”’), second sentence: ‘“There is the potential of Police corruption at …”’ —> “… potential of police corruption at …”
(8) The striking Africanus or Caribbean woman sounds like Udumi Ayeola, who ended up in NYC at the end of Daughter of Gor. She was in Milton Keynes, a city 50 miles north west of London at the beginning of Mistress of Gor and the “financial district” (presumably London) at the beginning of Black Beauty. She certainly gets around. The second picture, of Detective Greenwood sitting on a bench in the West Village being accosted by Kyril Flavius, is intriguing. Now we get to “a mere fleabite.”
(9) Paragraph Kyril talking to Detective Greenwood, first sentence: ‘“… There is no place for you as a vigili, a Police officer.”’ —> “… as a vigil, a police officer.” (“vigil” is common gender, applying to both a man and a woman, the plural is vigiles.)
(10) A nice touch putting Ginger Stowell in a nearby cage. A cute story on its own.
vyeh
Been in 345 Park several times moving/installing computers Unfortunately no slave tunic Kajira at the front desk Tenants include Blackstone Group and National Football League Several months ago was incident were man with gun shot up lobby killing several people before being killed by police
DeleteNot being a New Yorker, I had no idea of the significance of the Building. I do point out though that yearly the NFL parades young men across a stage and assigns them to 'Owners' without their having any say in the matter.
DeleteI am impressed, Vyeh by your knowledge of buildings and the geographical layout of New York; also of the political issues relating to the NYPD. On this side of the Atlantic, one must do one's best with the internet and google earth, and a lack of political info. The story is intended to be just that, fiction not directly attributable with current reality. I do my best, and hope that the story stands up on its own, independent of reality. The pictures are created by Tracker, for whom I am very grateful. I only supply the text. The ones that he has produced for this story do illustrate the story, I feel, perfectly. In this world of fake photographs, or morphing of real and fake, the mood, impression, and concurrence to the story become more relevant than actual reality.
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Delete(1) As I said in paragraph (10), the story is cute without the promised additional two parts as a continuation of the original two parts of Time Changes Everything. In your text, you specified Steel World Inc. was located near Wall Street, so 345 Park Avenue is a distraction that Tracker has already taken credit for. The rampant police corruption in the NYPD is as much a part of New York City as Wall Street. It was very jarring for the main character, a police detective, to claim there was no corruption.
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