Time Changes Everything
Peony D BecksideWith thanks to
John Norman for creating the basic concepts of the world of Gor and those who
have dealings with it. Also to Emma of
Gor for her ideas regarding the control at a distance, of kajirae on Earth,
Chapter One
I have been a slave for a long time. I have had many Masters; most good, some less so. My present Master is the best! I love him unreservedly. I do not presume to believe that he loves me. For a Gorean man protestations of ‘undying love’ for a slave, are just not given. I laugh to myself at such a bizarre and impossible situation. Often a Master will love his slave, but she must never take that for granted. It’s one sure way to make sure that one is sold, PDQ[1].
I recall not, how many Gorean years it has
been since I was enslaved. I do know how
many Earth years it has been since I was born, and how many since I was put in
a collar. I recall my mother telling me
as a child that I was born on the day after Queen Victoria’s[2]
death. In this year, 2025, that make me
124 years old! I’d be very surprised not
to be the oldest Earth woman, and perhaps the oldest Earth person alive! I giggle at that concept. Of course I can’t tell anyone, anyone on
Earth that, they’d think I was insane.
That I only appear to be some twenty five
years old, or thereabouts, is testament to the anti-ageing serums of the Gorean
caste of physicians.
Yes, it was in my twenty-fifth year that I
was taken from my home in London to the planet Gor, to become and serve as a
slave. Here on Earth, a whole century
has passed since then. The changes since
my capture are frankly unbelievable Even
in 1925, New York City was approaching the size of London Now it is over twice as large. The most obvious sign of that is the size of
the buildings! I could not believe the
height of some of them when I first saw them last year. As for the noise, bustle, and the huge number
of futuristic motor-cars, I thought I was going to go mad!
I have, since arriving back, heard of a
condition called ‘culture-shock’. I
don’t think that Master gave any thought to how such might affect me. Strangely, he seems to have taken to his new
life here surprisingly well. I too am
mostly functional in this, to me, totally new environment. I do however get some funny looks when
speaking English, using phrases common in the 1920’s.
Another aspect of this place, at least in
Summer when it’s warm enough, is the fracturing of the concept of
‘fashion’. It seems that women at least,
can wear anything they like, rather than the narrowly defined styles of the
past. Even the skimpy Gorean slave tunic
is permissible, just about.
Sure I get looked at, stared at, when
wearing such. Not that it’s my choice as
to when and where I sport such revealing attire. The men certainly appreciate it when they see
me dressed so, though they tend to look away when I turn to look at them. Strange.
I know that I’m beautiful!, valued, proud of that beauty. Not more beautiful than free-women of course
(though I suspect we are). It’s one of
the few prides that are permitted to us slave-girls. It’s almost as if the men here are
conditioned to be embarrassed and ashamed to be seen admiring a beautiful
woman.
The women, or most of them, particularly
those wearing trousers as men would, tend to look at me with the contempt of
Gorean free-women. To such, I suppose I
am ‘shameless’. They are not wrong. For a Gorean slave-girl, there is no place in
her life for the kind of bodily or sexual shame inculcated in Earth women by
patriarchal religions. We have no option
but to be lascivious, and ever-ready sluts.
There are however a small number of women that seem to admire my, what I
believe they would call ‘brazenness’: perhaps even to be jealous of that.
Immediately upon returning to Earth, the
Slave-World, as it is called in the house, it was made clear to me that whilst
in the house I would be under strict Gorean discipline, kneeling before all
free-persons, and calling them ‘Master’ or ‘Mistress’, outside it was not
expected or acceptable to kneel to free Earth people. I must however be respectful and deferential,
calling such ‘Sir’ or ‘Madam’. I suppose
that the distinction is that on a slave-world, such so-called free-persons are
not really free at all. They are however
more elevated than I, and must be treated as such.
Why my Master brought me here, I have no
idea; nor for that matter, why the people he works for allowed such. I mean, it’s not as if there is a shortage of
slaves to satisfy his needs. Here in the
House there are plenty, and each is available for his use. That’s not to mention the steady throughput
of new slaves on their way to Gor, such trade being a big part of what goes on
in the house. It pleases me immensely
that Master chains me to his couch and uses me well most nights, rather than
some of the other floozy’s round here.
Being a barbarian, an Earth-girl slave, I
should be doing everything that I can to expose what’s going on here, to save
more Earth-women from slavery. I do not,
will not. As well as the threat of
punishment, even death, for doing so, my own experiences make it clear to me,
that enslaving women from this planet is not wrong. Whether it offends their dignity, Gorean
Masters believe that all Earth women are ‘natural slaves’. I too believe that the socio-cultural milieu
of this planet makes them, us, perfect for the ‘collar’. Once having accepted their slavery, barbarian
slaves tend to blossom out into superb slaves.
They like I, come to adore their slavery. The threat of being returned to Earth is
terrifying to most of them. When Master
had told me I was to return here, I begged him piteously not to do so. Being a slave of course, I have no say. Master’s will is everything, mine
nothing. That he would also be coming
here made the prospect much less daunting.
I don’t like this place at all, it’s
dirty! Not the dustiness of a typical
Gorean city, this is not just the greyness of buildings and the dirtiness of
the air. It’s the dirtiness of the
soul. Even though I don’t understand
much of it, what I hear on the radiogram and this visual form, called
television I believe, makes it clear to me that there is a corruption, a
cruelty, a hidden enslavement of even the free, here. That underhandedness, that lack of honour, I
find filthy. Slavery on Gor, is at least
honest. open and above-board.
Of course, it’s not my place to comment, or
complain. One day, Master will return
home. I fervently hope that he will take
me back with him, not leave me here.
Now that’s an interesting concept. I might be a barbarian, an Earth-slut, but
Home for me now, is Gor not Earth. Does
that now make me Gorean? As legally,
under Gorean law, only an animal, can I claim to be Gorean? In my heart, I suppose that I can.
Chapter Two
My Master Kyril Flavius. answers to Groganto
Svensona, who seems to be the person in charge of the ‘House of Three
Moons’. The well-kept house itself is a
large building in the style that I believe is called a ‘Brownstone’. There’s more to it than that though, through
knocked-through rooms and doorways it extends into most of the surrounding
buildings. Effectively the whole city
block, upon which it stands is part and parcel of the ‘House’.
Master Svensona is a big bruiser of a
man. Broad as well as tall. He seems to be all mascle, with little fat,
as I have felt when Master has allowed my use by his superior. Master Svensona terrifies me. He is like a Larl, yet with the temper of a
sleen. He has the unpredictability, and
hair trigger of the Warrior that he is.
I am at my most submissive when offered to him.
Of course, my own Master is not soft with
me. I must have, and he drives me to,
the most perfect of surrenders in the furs.
My other duties, naturally, must be undertaken to perfection.
I am both multilingual and literate in both
Gorean and the English language. One of
my previous Master’s having been of the caste of Scribes, had me taught in how
to read and write Gorean. Perhaps that
was one of the deciding factors in Master deciding to bring me back to this
cesspit of a planet. I do struggle a
little sometimes in translations. It’s
not just that sometimes concepts are, to use an Earth cliché ‘Lost in
translation’. My Gorean lexicon was to
some extent limited by my status and duties.
Here on Earth, I find that not just has the style of writing and
speaking changed since I was here last, there are so many new words that didn’t
exist in the 1920’s and those that did, are not always used in the same way or
mean the same thing. I am intelligent
though, and learn quickly. A slave must,
her Master expects that of her.
Fortunately, none of my errors have irritated any of the Masters or
Mistresses in the house, enough to have me punished.
Much of my work, when not serving
intimately, is in research. Research
largely about potential subjects being considered for capture and subsequent
slavery. I have been taught how to use
the strange magic-window called a ‘computer’.
Deciding what’s true and what’s not, about the information presented
isn’t always easy, but I do seem to be able to pull together suitable dossiers
for the Masters.
My tasks though are not just of an
administrative and intimate nature.
Sometimes I am utilised in the taking of suitable ‘merchandise’. Such is the present circumstance.
The room is dark. Not dark enough that I can’t see what I’m
doing, but not light enough to wake the sleeping woman. I hold in my hand a syringe. The contents is a very fast acting
anaesthetic. The woman will not
awake. The discomfort of the needle
entering her body would normally arouse her, but with this drug, it will not.
I have been trained in how and where to
inject the woman. I do not have any
qualms about what I’m doing. For a
slave, particularly one who has been so for any significant length of time,
obedience is everything. Right or wrong
is the prerogative of free-persons, it is for them to satisfy their own
consciences. Conscience is something
that is not permitted a slave. As are
consequences. It is for one’s Master to weigh-up and accept the consequences,
if any, of his decisions. If those
consequences affect the slave, she must benefit or suffer those consequences,
it is not her choice. She is property.
She is not hers to make decisions that affect her. The worst that can happen for the Master, is
that he will lose his slave. By
definition then, as an obedient slave, I am doing nothing wrong. Ergo, no
qualms.
The needle of the syringe goes into the body
of the woman. She does not even
groan. She is caught. There is no escape for her. She will become a kajira on Gor. It might even be argued that she already is;
at least under Gorean Merchant law.
Under Earth law, of course, she isn’t and can’t be a slave. Under that law indeed, I am not a slave! Inwardly I giggle at that. There is what the law says and what in
practice exists. I remain slave, legal
or not. Theoretically on this planet, I
could reclaim my freedom. I did briefly,
when I arrived consider if I should do that.
Given the choice, not that I ever will be given it, of freedom (or the
semi-freedom that most Earth people have) on this ruined world or slavery on
Gor, I’ll take the slavery thank you. At
least slavery to my present Master, at least.
Besides Gor is so much more pristine than Earth. If slavery is the price of one day returning
to that world, I’ll gladly pay it. It’s
not as simple as that though. Master’s
strongest chains on me are invisible; literal ones are additional. Perhaps the strongest of those invisible
chains is Love. I’ve already said that I
love Master unconditionally.
I pull the bedclothes off the woman and
reach for her feet. I tug her ankles off
the bed, positioning the slave-sack ready to receive them.
A slave-sack is a long tapered bag of
leather. It is a way of restraining and
transporting a slave without her features being seen, or she seeing where she
is being taken. The sack tapers from the
narrowness at the slave’s feet to the width of her hips and shoulders. It rises up so as to extend up beyond the
head of the slave. At its opening it has
metal-reinforced eyelets. A chain runs
through those eyelets, closing up the top, whereupon it is secured with a kind
of padlock. Once in the sack, and it is
locked above her head, the slave cannot escape.
Being leather, it is necessary if the slave is to breathe, that there
are air-holes. These are generally too
small, and are reinforced so that the slave cannot get her fingers into them
and attempt to tear her way out. The
air-holes are generally lower down the sack away from the slave’s head, so she
cannot look out of them. For aesthetic
and identification reasons the air-holes tend to be arranged in a pattern like
a Kef, the Gorean letter K. Thus signifying
that the contents is a slave. It is the
same pattern as the most common of all slave-brands. The same symbol that graces my own left
thigh.
With the slave’s feet in the sack, I work
the leather up over her hips to her shoulders.
I am about to pull the remainder of the sack over her head. There is a loud bang as the door of the room
smashes back against the wall. Through
the doorway leap two blue-suited men, wearing peaked caps.
Vigiles!
I have to make the mental shift from Gorean to English. Policemen!
One of them shouts.
“Freeze!”
Even in the 1920’s I knew what a pistol was,
and that it would kill me if fired. Both
Police officers point such firearms at me.
The word ‘Freeze’ is sufficiently unambiguous, and besides, a free(ish)
man has given me an order. I am
sufficiently conditioned to obey such instantly. I stay very still.
“On your knees now!”
This is an order I am well familiar
with. I morph down as gracefully and
sexily as I am able into the nadu position, my knees wide, my bottom resting on
my heels, my back straight, my hands on my thighs. It’s automatic for me to fall into nadu. If the order had come from a woman, I would
have fallen into ‘tower’ position, the same as nadu but with knees closed,
without thinking.
I take in the effect of my kneeling so, on
the two Policemen. It’s clear that both
of them have found my compliance with their order somewhat sexy. I love it when men react to my beauty! It
validates me as a woman. Fortunately,
the brevity of my slave tunic still covers my pussy. It wouldn’t have mattered even if it hadn’t. I’m well used to being naked in front of men.
One of the officers reaches for the
slave-bracelets, attached to his belt.
No, the word here on Earth is ‘handcuffs’. They are not as beautifully decorated as
slave-bracelets, and they are a bit more heavy duty, as they are designed to
restrain men, not just slaves. The man
walks behind my back.
“Hands behind your back.”
I comply without conscious thought. It’s an order from a free-man! I feel the cold metal circle my wrists and
the clack-clack-clack of ratchets.
Whilst he’s fastened them tightly enough to hold me, thankfully they are
not so tight as to be painful.
I am fully well aware of how effective
slave-bracelets are. I don’t need to
test these, I know they secure me adequately.
I also know that such restraints only hurt if one fights against them,
and these handcuffs, being a bit more brutal, will perhaps hurt more.
The other officer talks into a communication
device. I suspect he’s calling up for a
ambulance for the erstwhile slave-girl candidate. Perhaps also for a more senior officer, a
detective maybe. Yes, I know what a
detective is. Such had been a stock
character in theatrical melodrama’s when I was here before. Doubtless, the Police would want to know the
full story, and who else is involved.
Even to the most stupid policeman, slight of body as I am, I would
struggle to carry the presently comatose woman any distance, and for that
matter, how would I get her from the building without being seen. No, it’ll be quite clear to them that there
is an, what’s that Earth word again?; ah-yes, accomplice.
The Policemen watch me carefully in case I
try to run away. I don’t see how I could
do so without one or both of them seeing me do it. Even with the smoothness of my experience and
training, rising from a kneeling position without the use of hands is
challenging and slower than with the use of hands. Having ascertained that the sleeping woman is
still breathing, the Policemen rather pointedly don’t do anything to upset the
‘scene of the crime’. Training, no
doubt!
After what I take to be about fifteen
minutes another man, one not in uniform enters the room. I take him to be a detective. He is accompanied by a woman, who has a
sophisticated camera. The man examines
the room in detail, pointing out to the photographer, things that are of
interest, the syringe, the slave-sack, etc.
The woman takes many pictures.
The detective gives orders to the two
uniformed officers.
“Take the woman to the 4th
precinct. We’ll interrogate her there.”
I am lifted to my feet and impelled out of
the apartment[3], down the
elevator[4]
and into the Police car waiting at the curb.
I am amazed by these modern motor cars, how
big, how quiet, how fast they are, even one as basic as this. The few cars in 1920’s London were utterly
crude by the present standards. I had
the distinction of being the first woman in my street to ride in a motor car!
Chapter Three
The room is bare. There’s nothing in it to entertain or delight
the eye. I note an appliance in the upper corner of the room. It appears to be pointing at me. Tentatively I identify it as some kind of
moving-picture camera. Yes, there were
moving-picture shows before I left. I
found them fascinating. I like the
dead-pan Buster Keaton and that bashful little clown man with the bowler-hat,
Charlie Chaplin, yes, that’s him.
There’s a table and two chairs in the room, each opposite one
another. One chair is facing a huge
mirror that takes up most of one wall, the other has its back to the mirror.
I kneel, facing the mirror. Whilst chairs are uncommon on Gor, those that
exist are clearly only for free-persons.
I therefore don’t presume to sit on one of the chairs. Besides, I’m no longer used to sitting on
such things.
I kneel in ‘Nadu’ position. So far I have only seen male vigil.. Police
officers. I admire myself in the
mirror. I’m one gorgeous piece of
slave-flesh though I say so myself. Not
bad for one hundred and twenty four year old Earth woman! Whilst the skimpy slave-silk tunic I wear is
short, it’s just long enough to cover my pussy.
The reflection of my collar is surprisingly bright. I take in the delicate beauty of my dangling
ear-decorations. Yes, I am that low a
slut. Among Gorean women, slaves and free
alike, the concept of pierced ears is barbaric.
For a woman, a slave, to be made by her Master to have her ears pierced,
is traumatising. A pierced-ear girl is
by definition the most debased and low of all sluts. A free-woman of course would never allow
herself such humiliation. If it was
forced on her, whilst it would not be tantamount to slavery, the shame would
force her to declare herself slave, and accept the consequences of that. I did not feel the same trauma as Gorean
slaves when my ears were pierced.
Culturally it was not so shocking for me. It amuses me now just how many Earth women,
these semi-free ones voluntarily of their own free will have this, to Gorean women
shameful act of ear-piercing done to themselves!
The building where I have been brought is
busy and bustling, with many people all trying to get the attention of a
harassed uniformed man. I am taken
through a side door and along a corridor before being deposited in this room.
The officer bringing me here removed the
slave-bracelets.
“Wait here.”
It’s an order from a free-man. Only one from my Master, or his superior
would have precedence. I do not try to
leave.
My Master will know precisely where I
am.
The door opens. A woman enters. I sense a kind of sneering smirk in the set
of her mouth, perhaps at my kneeling position.
The woman is wearing black trousers with a slight flare at the
ankle. Her shoes rise her heel slightly
on a blocky heel; unlike the sharp pointed heels I’ve seen on some women here,
or the hideous boots or canvas-looking shoes worn by some others. Me?
Shoes are not something I am familiar with at all. The woman wears a blouse of green shiny
satin, that’s cut similarly to a man’s shirt, but shaped to accentuate that the
woman has breasts. Her hair is quite
long, but pulled back into a style reminiscent of a horses tail. Whilst not heavy, there is a hint of colour
on her eyelid, eye-socket, and lips.
Despite the general mannishness of the woman’s appearance, I sense that
men would not wear a shirt of such material, or have such long hair. I tentatively conclude that the woman is not
completely masculinised, that there is still some femininity in her. At her belt there is a tiny shield shaped
piece of metal. It’s too small to be
effective. Is it then some kind of badge
of authority? That she’s not wearing a
blue uniform, even a feminised one, makes me wonder. Is she some kind of detective? I find the concept of a female detective
somewhat intriguing.
There is something about this woman that I
sense she’s more important than the average Earth woman. Almost without conscious thought I mentally
switch to using the Earth equivalent of the Gorean word ‘Domina’, Mistress, not
the ‘Madam’ that I have become accustomed to using when addressing Earth
free-women. She indicates one of the
chairs, the one facing the mirror.
“Sit on the chair.”
“I comply, Mistress, but such could be
seen as disrespectful.”
There’s a look of surprise on her face,
perhaps at being referred to as Mistress, but also at me considering the usage
of the chair as being ‘above myself’. I
sit as ordered.
“I am Detective Hannah Greenwood. I am obliged by law to tell you that ‘You
have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against
you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney. If you cannot afford
an attorney, one will be appointed for you free of charge. Do you understand these rights?”
I have rights? This detective says I have, but I know
otherwise. I am a slave. A slave has no rights. She must then think me
a free-woman.
“Yes, Mistress, but what’s an
utt-tour-ney?”
She looks at me as if I’m mad.
“A legal adviser. If you wish one, you must ask for one.”
I trawl the memory of my youth.
“Ah!
A solicitor[5]. I understand Mistress. Thank you.
I have done nothing wrong, Mistress. Why would I need a solicitor?”
My Master gave me an order. I fulfilled it to the best of my
ability. I don’t think I did anything to
draw the attention of the Policemen; and in any case I don’t really understand
why these Police seem to think I was doing something wrong? I obeyed my Master, as I must, as I have no
choice but to do so. What wrong then
have I done? It was a perfectly ordinary
slave-capture until the blue-coated men stormed in, pointing pistols.
The woman starts formally questioning
me. Where are the torture
implements? I know that on Gor, the
testimony of a slave is always taken under torture. Am I to be spared that? I sigh with relief, but can I take it that I
won’t be tortured if the woman doesn’t think I’m telling the truth? I have to hope so.
“What is your name please?”
I am unused to the courtesy of the word
‘please’, but can think of no way to say so without offending this woman.
“I am called Alyena, Mistress.”
“And your other name, Alyena?”
“I have no other name, Mistress.”
“Don’t get smart with me, lady! If Alyena is your first name, you will have a
family name. If Alyena is your family name, you will have a forename. What is your full name?”
“I have only the one name,
Mistress. It’s all I’m allowed.”
I know that I must be respectful, not just
because of this woman’s position, but because my Master or someone else at the
House of Three Moons would know and expect that of me. My earrings. as they are called here though
they are not rings as such, are more than mere decorations. They are miniature listeners that feed back
everything that I hear (including what I say) back to the House. Masters can listen in directly or to a period
in the past. Such inventions amaze
me. They are like magic, compared to my
1920’s understanding of scientific advances.
Such a powerful control on what I say and how I say things is both
frightening, yet strangely erotic. Is
there no aspect of my life that is not subject to review and if appropriate,
correction? I have yet to find
such. That rigidity of bondage without
physical bonds I find quite carnal.
The word ‘allowed’ seems to puzzle Detective
Greenwood.
“You’ve had another name before?”
“Yes, Mistress. But it was a long time ago.”
I dare not tell her how long ago, she truly
will think I’m insane. I contemplate
remaining silent. Sadly I have no way of knowing what’s the right thing to
do. I am unable to tell what course of
action will be seen as pleasing to my Master and his colleagues, and by
extension what will be considered displeasing.
I quail at the thought of being displeasing to any Master, to the House. For so many years it has been drilled into
me, often with the lash, that I must be honest, forthcoming and fully open to all
free-persons. Offering dumb resistance
to a free-person is something that is totally unacceptable for me. I must therefore answer the questions put to
me, whether the answers are believed or not.
I have to hope that Master understands that.
“And what was that name?”
I have to think for a moment. It’s been so long since I used it.
“Christine Punstunby, Mistress”
Not a common family name, even in England.
“Your accent is strange. Not American…”
A momentary amusement flits through my
brain. Definitely not, but it’s unlikely
this woman would guess ‘Gorean’.
“English? Are you English?”
I’m amazed.
I’d have thought that by this time any trace of an English accent would
have been lost. But how do I answer? I
don’t know how I can claim to be English, not having been there for a hundred
years or so? How do I phrase this so it
isn’t a lie?
“I was born in London, Mistress.”
Detective Greenwood turns to the mirror and
calls out.
“Check that, please Charlie!”
What?!
Is there another room beyond the mirror?
Can someone in that room somehow see through the mirror? I snigger to myself. When I’d ben kneeling in nadu, had someone
beyond the mirror been watching me? Did
they perhaps see more of me than I saw in my reflection? Lucky them. I’ve no dignity to defend. Any embarrassment over my body was lost
decades ago.
I presume that this ‘Charlie’ will use a
computer to try and check up on me, as I do on prospective captures.
Since returning to Earth and having been
taught how to use them, I’ve been astounded by the interlinked information
sources allowing one to learn practically everything about someone else.
Doubtless those sources that the vigiles… er… Police have will likely be better
than I usually have access to, but can they find out about someone captured in
London a century ago?
“Why do you keep calling me ‘Mistress’?”
“You are superior to me, Mistress. It is an appropriate honorific for one in
your position.”
I can see that she’s still puzzled by
that. I see her looking at my
collar. It too mystifies her, like a
half forgotten memory. Has she at some
point read those autobiographies of persons taken to Gor, that are passed off
as fiction here on Earth?
“Interesting necklace. It has markings on it... Take it off, please.”
Perhaps in this light she cannot read the
legend incised into the metal. There is
only one possible response to her request.
“Forgive me, Mistress. I cannot.
I do not have the key.”
Her shock is genuine.
“It’s locked on you?!!! You are unable to remove it?”
“That’s so, Mistress.”
I lean forward, tilting my head back.
“Please feel free to read, Mistress.”
I know what it says. ‘Alyena.
Property of Kyril Flavius. If
found, please return me for punishment.
Reward.’
Detective Greenwood leans forward. I hear her shocked intake of breathe.
“Property? Like in slavery? Punishment?”
“Precisely Mistress. I am a slave.
I am subject to punishment if I am found displeasing in any way.”
The woman is clearly marshalling her
thoughts.
“You can’t be a slave. Slavery is illegal”
“Nevertheless Mistress, I am a
slave. With respect Mistress, have I
somehow committed a crime in having been
enslaved? I was not given the choice,
Mistress,”
She has to think about that one.
“I don’t think that you are guilty of an
offence by being enslaved, but it’s clear that someone, presumably this Kyril
Flavius is guilty of enslavement.”
“Mistress, I was first enslaved in other
lands, lands where slavery is legal. My
slavery then is legal, is it not?”
This is so.
I might have been captured in England, but was not actually enslaved
until arrival on the planet Gor. The
brand and collar, slave papers, etc., where applied to me outside the
jurisdiction of any Earthly government.
I sense some sympathy for me, from the
woman. Her voice is gentle.
“No, it is not. From the moment you landed on American soil,
you were a free woman. That you were not told this, that this Kyril Flavius
clearly continues to treat you as a slave, is prima facie evidence that he has
and still is committing a criminal act.
You are legally free.”
I’m not sure that I want that. I love my Master. I am happy in my slavery, as happy as any
slave can be. I’m not sure that I want
the pretences and choices of being a free-woman, Gorean, or even an Earth
free-woman.
Detective Greenwood’s mood however hardens.
“There is still the question of your
attempted abduction of the woman you were stuffing into a type of large
body-bag. As a free-woman that makes you
culpable. You are in a lot of trouble,
lady. You are going to spend the rest of
your life in jail. Why don’t you tell me
who your accomplices are? If you
cooperate, I can ask the judge to be lenient.
Is this Kyril Flavius your partner in this crime? Where do I find him? Are you acting under his orders? If you are, that might just mitigate your
sentence.”
I really don’t know what to say for the
best. Whilst I hope that Master will
save me from this invidious situation, I would not want him to be caught
too. I am concerned that he might simply
abandon me to my fate, considering me replaceable, a small financial loss of my
‘purchase price’. It doesn’t help that I can’t actually tell this woman where
in this huge city, the House of Three Moons is situated. No-one’s ever told me. Whenever I’ve left or arrived it’s been in an
enclosed vehicle. As well as that, the
Masters would probably be extremely displeased if I told this Policewoman, even
if I knew. There’s a difference between
obeying the general order to tell the whole truth always, and causing trouble
to Masters!
There’s a crackling voice from
somewhere. Where I can’t quite
tell. From beyond the glass perhaps?
“Detective Greenwood, we need a word with
you, please.”
The woman leaves the room. I have not been given permission to
leave. I remain seated.




Peony D Beckside:
ReplyDelete(1) The title of the post, “Time Changes Everything (1 of 2) Pauline Armitage” doesn’t quite match the title “Time Changes Everything” and the pen name, “Peony D Beckside.” Obviously, a two parter. The acknowledgement was interesting. I assume “control at a distance, of kajirae on Earth” refers to the ankle rings in The Slave World. Interesting picture of an English woman in the early 20th century. The Intriguing first paragraph before the “Read more >” break mentions a “Gorean master” although the picture is of England.
(2) Acknowledgement, second sentence: “Also to Emma … control at a distance, of kajirae on Earth,” —> … a distance of kajirae on Earth.
(3) In the first paragraph, first sentence after the “Read more >” break, “I do not recall, how many Gorean years it has been since I was enslaved. I do know how many Earth years … since I was put in a collar.” —> … do not recall how many Gorean … (Because Gor is always on the opposite side of the Sun from Earth, a Gorean year must equal an Earth year.)
(4) Third paragraph after the “Read more >” break (“Yes, it was …”, third sentence: “The changes since … are frankly unbelievable Even in 1925 …” —> … are frankly unbelievable. Even in 1925 … (missing period)
(5) The second picture, of the narrator kajira kneeling on the sidewalk in Manhattan’s West Village, and the third picture, of the narrator kajira looking at a sleeping Earth woman, are very nice.
(6) Fourth paragraph after the second picture (“Why my Master …”), last sentence: “It pleases me … the other floozy’s round here.” —> … the other floozies round here.
(7) Second paragraph after the third picture (“Master Svensona is …”), third sentence: “He seems to be all mascle, with little fat, …” —> … be all muscle, with little fat, … Fifth sentence: “He is like a Larl, yet with the … —> … like a larl, yet with the …
(8) Fourth paragraph after the third picture (“I am both …”), second sentence: “One of my previous Master’s having been … ” —> … my previous Masters having been …
(9) The fourth picture, of the narrator kajira kneeling in the interrogation room as the interrogator walks in, is nice.
(10) Ninth paragraph after the fourth picture (“The door opens. …”), ninth sentence: “Her hair is … of a horses tail.” —> … of a horse’s tail.
(11) Why is the Alyena’s collar in English? Surely the collar she had on Gor was in Gorean. You chose a nice place for the break between parts 1 & 2. Obviously, Charlie behind the one way mirror has gotten a hit on “Christine Punstunby.” The first part of Time Changes Everything was very well done. You’ve set the table appropriately, taking the right amount of words to set up the situation. I very much look forward to next Monday to read the conclusion.
vyeh
The discrepancy in the authors between the title and the body of the post has been corrected. that error was mine, not Peony's
DeleteHi Vyeh, The pictures have been supplied by Tracker, I know not how to use AI to create suitable pictures. I like to hope that I paint with words. :-)
DeleteThe reason Alyena's collar is in English is mentioned as an aside in the next chapter.