A Talendar for Shirley
Peony D Beckside
With acknowledgement and thanks to John Norman for
creating the world of Gor, in which this story is set.
Chapter Six: Reality With A Bump!
The building is solid,
almost forbidding, like one would expect the facade of one of those old
Victorian prisons. The blue and yellow
banners somehow don’t alleviate the exterior drabness. Master swings the big solid door
knocker. The sound echoes back within
the building. A man in robes similar to
those of Master opens the door.
“Is this the house of
Thromberg?”
“It is, Caste
Brother. How may we be of assistance.”
“May I speak with your
Proprietor? Assuming that’s not
yourself?”
“No, Perhaps one day I might have a house of my own. Do come in, I’ll call Stephanis Thromberg.”
I take these few words
to be some kind of introduction. Master
enters; I, of necessity, must follow. We
are shown into a plush room, fitted out with silk hangings and thick rugs. Clearly the owner of this place is wealthy,
hence powerful. Master doesn’t need to
tell me to kneel. I get the feeling that
here precision, at least in a slave is important. My kneeling posture is as has been taught me,
my knees widely parted. Master glances
and smiles. I take it that he is pleased
with my apparent submission. A corpulent
man enters the room. Again Master and he
jabber away. I think that I’m picking up
odd words in this weird language, but I still can’t get a coherent thread of
what’s being discussed.
Stephanis Thromberg, whilst somewhat overweight does not
carry himself with the air of someone who lives a soft life. Given that I’ve not used a sword in over ten
years, I’m not sure that I’d want to take this man on. It’s in his look, I think, that sense of
dangerousness I perceive.
“Greetings sir. Who do I
have the pleasure of greeting?”
“Michalis Dundras, Caste
Brother.”
“I know most of the
slavers in Tharna, and the nearby cities.
With no disrespect, I don’t recall us ever having had business before.”
“You wouldn’t. I’ve been working in barbarian lands for the
last ten years and have only just returned.
Prior to that, I was little more than an apprentice in the caste.”
“This Earth place, I’ve
heard of? The slave planet. It sounds rather bizarre, yet clearly the
stock that comes from there are truly slaves.”
“That’s the place, and
yes, bizarre is as good a description as any.”
“How may I help you,
Brother?”
“I gather that you may
have recently taken delivery of a batch of barbarian kajirae. I’m assuming that you will be training them
prior to putting them on the Block[1]…”
I
wave at the kneeling Shirley.
“...This is a souvenir,
a thank-you gift from my previous employers.
She too is an untrained barbarian.
I do not have the facilities as yet, to train her except in the most basic
and crude expectations. You, I surmise
do. I wonder if it would be possible to
have her trained here alongside those that you have recently acquired. For a fee of course…”
Thromberg
had barely glanced at my slave when he entered this room, but then he sees and
assesses many women, Shirley is just another.
To me she is beautiful, but in reality she’s not yet high-price
merchandise.
“Does she speak Gorean?”
“No more than the few words necessary to show basic
respect.”
“We’d have full usage and punishment rights over her?”
“Of course. I’d not have your staff being hamstrung in
their training of her, by excessive restrictions.”
“I may assess her? Put her through slave paces?”
“Certainly,
Brother. I’d be surprised if you
didn’t! I’ll translate for you if you
are unfamiliar with the Earth language ‘English’.”
“I think I can
manage. I’ve often listened in on the
training of barbarians, deeming it beneficial to get a smattering of this
tongue, if only to strengthen my control over the stock.”
“A good precaution. Please go ahead.”
“Shirley. This man will assess you. He will give you a series of commands. He may caress you. You will obey him
perfectly, instantly, and gracefully without demurring. You will not embarrass me with
insubmissiveness. I trust you haven’t
forgotten the whip?”
“No Dominus, yes,
Dominus.”
Assess me for what, I
wonder. This fat man wears similar robes
to Master. Is he in the same ‘line of
work’ as Master, a slaver? Is Master
thinking of disposing of me, selling me?
I sure hope not, given the effort he’s taken to get me here. If the truth’s known, I’m terrified at that
prospect. Is such simply fear of the
unknown. It’s bad enough not knowing
‘which way is up’ in this culture, so as to know what is the best option. I fear though that any decision about what
happens to me, will not be mine to be made.
I doubt I will have any say at all.
At least Master is a kind of anchor.
I’d truly be adrift without him to guide me.
I
am driven by the man to a whole string of positions, many of which are quite
demeaning. The speed starting slowly as
many of the terms for the positions entered into are explained to me. I have to learn fast, to remember what each
position is called, as once explained an English description is no longer
given. The man speeds up to the point where I am effectively an automaton, a
puppet. I try so hard to slide
gracefully from one position to another.
I’m breathing fast, sweating, my heartbeat pounding, but more than that,
I’m finding to my shame that this obscene exhibition of my nakedness is
exciting me sexually. I feel my nipples
harden, the gooey stickiness between my lower lips gushing. I feel the man’s fingers rubbing me stoking
my fires even more.
“She oils well, and just
from slave-paces. That speaks of a deep
sexual latency, but yes her movements are crude, no fluidity. You are correct, she does badly need formal
training.”
“Would you be prepared
to carry out that task? How long would
that take? How much training would you
normally give to barbarians before putting them on the block?”
“I’m aiming to have the
new batch of barbarians on the block by the end of the next but one passage
hand. You can put up with that?”
Two
months or so, by Earth time measurement.
Yes, that’s acceptable. I discuss
a price with Stephanis Thromberg. Whilst
quite pricey, it’s within my expectations.
I agree.
“There’s just one minor
matter. Shirley has just had the first
of her stabilisation serums at the house of Ermelo Gratchis. Paolus Vonci, his assistant asked me to bring
her back in about a week’s time for a final booster…”
“Think nothing of it
Michalis, I’ll have her taken there and the shot given. I’ll only charge you what Assistant Physician
Vonci charges me.”
“A pleasure doing
business with you Sephanis! Do you want
paying now?”
“Half now, and the
remainder upon collection will be best, I think. If that’s fine with you.”
“Eminently, thank you.”
I’m frightened! It sounds to me as though Master is
bargaining with this other man. Even
though I haven’t forgiven him for abducting me and whipping me, the prospect of
him selling me terrifies. A momentary
memory of the gloriousness of Master’s taking of me, chained in his
‘fuck-corner’ alcove surfaces. I’ll
forgive him for that effective rape, since it was so good. Any further such explorations, assuming he
isn’t selling me, will not be unwelcome and hence not rape.
Demeaning
as it would be, I want so much to throw myself to Master’s feet and beg him not
to dispose of me to this odious fat man.
What stops me is Master’s stricture on not embarrassing him.
I’m
trying very hard to make it look as if I’m not taking any notice of the
discussion taking place. Whilst I can’t understand what’s being said, much can
be learned from body-language. I decide
that just listening, immersing myself in the language, will aid me as I learn
and become more and more proficient.
Just picking up the lilt and flow of a language is half of the
task. The vocabulary and syntax will
fall into place if I can acquire the basic diction.
There’s
something in the to-ing and fro-ing of the conversation that give me the
impression that it’s winding down, some agreement having been reached
perhaps. It’d be a lie if I were to say
that I didn’t have any trepidation. I
switch my pretend inattention to Master.
He speaks to me.
“Shirley, you will stay
here for a while. You are to be trained
in how to be a good slave. You will
learn the minutiae necessary for you to survive in your role, and in this world. This slave-house will have full rights over
you in everything. Your stay here will
not be easy. You will put your heart and
soul into learning the lessons they will teach you. The house will not let you do otherwise. Your training will be intense, and many of
your lessons may be repugnant to your Earth sensibilities. Such inhibitions are inappropriate to you
now, you must abandon them and embrace your new reality with fervour. Slack off in your lessons, and you will be
punished by your trainers and perhaps also by your peers, the others with whom
you will train. When I return, I will
expect you to have improved immeasurably.
Do you understand?”
“Yes,
Master, but I’m frightened…”
“So you should be. Use that fear to drive you to excel.”
With some ruefulness, I
acknowledge. What now for me? The fat man claps his hands. Two of the most beautiful women that I have
ever seen enter with a flowing grace that takes my breath away. They take my arms and bid me rise and
follow. As I am taken away, I see Master
count out some coins from a small leather pouch. I look at the women directing me. They are slaves. High slaves, I surmise. The collars locked on their throats are not
simple steel. The collars are
beautifully lacquered. The tunics they
wear are no less revealing than those I’d seen on slaves I’d seen on the
streets of this city, but there is a subtle pattern and sheen deep in the
cloth.



Peony D Beckside:
ReplyDelete(1) “Reality with a Bump!” is a nice title. Didn’t she get branded last chapter? That is a bump by itself. The first picture, of Michalis and Shirley, is nice, and the blue and yellow banners follow the text. I like the conversation between Michalis and Stephanis Thromberg, the second picture, of the two men talking and Shirley kneeling, Shirley’s thoughts of being sold, Staphanis’ assessment of Shirley, Shirley’s further thoughts about being sold, Michalis’ instructions to Shirley and the third picture of Shirley with the other two kajirae.
(2) Weird question for Tracker: Did you use a Japanese or Korean AI generator. All of the kajirae have Asiastic features. Only Shirley’s hair is nonblack although it is black in the first picture. For both Peony and Tracker this was a well done chapter with nice pacing and illustrations to match.
vyeh
Great chapter, can't understand why the first and second picture show Shirley Barefoot and the third with shoes on, surely a slave is to be Barefoot at all times
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