Middle of August, 2016
Narrative of
Patrick Masters
(Except for the first paragraph, this section was supplied by Richard
Estey. I thank him very much – Tracker)
For the past few weeks since my return to San Francisco from Pittsburgh, all had gone smoothly and peacefully, The Frick’s trouble with the patent troll Van Rijn was settled and in return I had received my appointment as a consul for the Grand Duchy of Lutha. This permitted me to legally own slaves on consulate territory, my home in Drysdale House. I had acquired a second slave, and my household was run by the formidable Mrs Magruder. Life was smooth and I was happy. Don Emery, the remote Emery cousin had come and measured Juli and Veronika for silks and slave tunics. He was taken with Juli. He was disappointed when I allowed him the use of Veronika instead.
Now was time for some relaxation I knew of a quaint little
Italian restaurant outside of San Francisco,
perfect for a master and his slave girl.
Calling up the Maitre ‘d I booked
a private room, one with its own waiter for my dinner with Juli.
We arrived at the restaurant at 8 PM. Juli was wearing a short tight red dress with
a V plunging neck line , one little longer than slave livery, just enough to
cover the brand on her left thigh. Of
course she was not permitted any undergarments.
I had replaced her collar with an anklet to be less conspicuous, heeding
the advice of the noted slave writer Trakker that there always be some item of
bondage on a slave . Waiting in the
lobby of the restaurant to be taken to our room, Juli’s attire attracted
attention. The eyes of all the males
locked onto this alluring creature as lustful thoughts coursed through their
heads . The reactions of the women were
in contrast as hateful expressions registered on their faces, one women could
be seen mouthing the word “SLUT” as she studied Juli. The dinner was sumptuous with multiple
courses, perfect for celebratory dinner.
I could hardly wait to get Juli home to put her to use. Little did I realize what would transpire
this evening.
The drive home started out uneventfully, but at some point I
noticed another vehicle behind us. For
some unknown reason I felt uneasy as the mystery vehicle hung back. I began
some maneuvers, speeding up and slowing down, changing lanes. The mystery vehicle matched all my
maneuvers. We were being followed! I kept a close watch on the mystery
vehicle. I soon noticed that it was
slowly gaining on us. My senses were now
on full alert. I yelled to Juli
“GET DOWN ! ON THE
FLOOR ! “
Juli slipped out her seat belt and crouched in the footwell
under the dashboard
As the mystery vehicle pulled alongside my car I suddenly
stomped on the accelerator causing the car to shoot forward, Juli screamed as a blast of gunfire shattered
the rear windows of the car. I floored
the accelerator and began weaving in and out of traffic at speeds over 100 mph trying to shake off my pursuers. Angry horn blasts and rude gestures followed
us as I maneuvered to deny the pursuers a clear shot. A block away from Drysdale House, I punched
a button on the steering wheel opening the gate to the porte cochere. As the car shot through the gate I punched
the button again, closing the gate. The perusing
vehicle screeched to a halt outside the gate. After studying the closed gate
for a moment the mystery vehicle peeled out in a cloud of tire smoke. I walked over to the passenger side viewing
the bullet riddled rear of the car. If I had not stomped on the gas at the last
moment both Juli and I would have been killed.
I opened the door and extracted her from the footwell under the
dashboard. Juli was shaking with
terror. I took her in my arms and spoke
to her in soothing tones, like a parent comforting a frightened child, I carried
Juli inside. I did not kennel
her, but took her upstairs to my bedroom.
After stripping off her dress and replacing the anklet with her collar I
chained her left ankle to the slave ring set in the side of the bed. Covering her with blanket I started to leave
“Please Master, stay with me’ “Hold me”
“Later” I said
Entering my library, I poured myself a stiff drink and
composed several messages. One to the
Fricks describing the incident and my narrow escape. Second, my fried Jerry Reiss warning him to be on his guard.
Nursing my drink, I heard the phone beep
indicating an incoming call. Surprisingly
it came from Wyandotte Frick himself, head of the Frick clan. Answering it Wyandotte queried me as to the
night’s activities
“Are you hurt Mr Masters? ”
inquired Wyandotte
“No sir, myself and my kajira were able to escape”
“A most fortunate outcome”
“Have you gone to the authorities ?”
“No sir, that would only invite a number of awkward
questions and prying into our activities”
“I believe it can better be handled within the Frick organization”
“A wise choice Mr Masters”
“Take care Mr Master, we will be in touch”
Meanwhile across town a man picked up his phone
“This is Vansittart”
“Masters was able to escape” replied the voice on the other
end of the line
“A most distressing outcome”
“Do you want us to try again?” inquired the mystery voice
After a short pause “No, not right now” “Keep Masters and
his associates under observation” “We will wait for an opportune time to
strike” “Take the vehicle you used and
leave it at this location for disposal”
“It will be done sir”
“I must now report what transpired to our superiors, Vansittart
out”
Patrick Masters
After finishing my drink and wrapping up the communications
I went to my bedroom and slipped into bed with Juli. I put her to use
“Oh master, I am so frightened” she said as I took her in my
arms
“Hush slave” as I extracted my pleasure from her.
Our love making had a frenetic quality, the result of 2
people having created death and are happy to be alive. We fell asleep in each other’s arms
Waking up the next morning we resumed our lovemaking.
When I was finished, I unchained Juli from the slave ring.
“Go and make breakfast” I commanded
“Yes master” She bent down to pick up the dress from the
floor
“Leave it” I commanded. “Yes Master”
I ruminated on waking up with a naked slave girl in your
bed. I would have to have her spend the
night in my bed more often
Checking my messages I found another from the Fricks. It advised me to remove any items of interest
from my car. A flat bed tow truck would
be coming to pick it up for disposal.
The Fricks apparently think of everything, no loose ends to leave around
I put on a robe and went to the kitchen for breakfast, Juli
had prepared bacon and eggs, toast, orange juice and coffee. She had prepared a
dish for herself, but had not partaken, waiting for me, the master, to
eat. Juli was kneeling naked in nadu,
waiting for me As I started to eat I
indicated she may start. “Thank you Master “she whispered
I wondered who was behind the attack on me and Juli. Wyandotte
had forbidden any revenge attacks on VanRijn and his women. Who would be bold
enough to carry out such an attack? The Fricks with their numerous contacts
would soon find out. Then what?
Lazy F Ranch
Montana
Narrative of
Smith, Assistant Foreman on the Lazy F
By the middle of August at the foothills of the Rockies the
nights are cold, even though the days are still warm. Hawkins, the Assistant
Foreman for Special Livestock, and I were both cold, even in our duffle coats.
Even colder on that cold night on Priest’s Hill were the naked girls waiting to
take the silver ship to Gor. We could stamp our feet and rub our hands, the livestock
awaiting transfer could not. Their legs were in close shacks and they were, as
a normal matter of procedure, back-braceleted. Hawkins was impatient.
“I hope they are on time. The last ship was two hours late making the rendezvous.”
“That was in the early summer.
Before the attacks, even. The one just after was on time, remember? Woodrow
Frick tells me this one will be on time. The message said the Master of the Ship
is Marius the Mariner, and that Marius is always where he says he will be, and
more importantly, when he says he will be.”
Hawkins was still grumpy. It was his nature.
“And why isn’t Mr Woodrow Frick
here freezing with us, I would like to know. He was supposed to be here, to
oversee the transfer and take care of things.”
“I don’t know why you are so unpleasant.
You have more access than most of us to the cargo awaiting shipment. The red-silk
ones anyway.”
“It is all part of their training.
You don’t think I enjoy it, do you?
Hawkins’ grin showed he enjoyed his duties very much.
Custodian and trainer of the coffles being sent off world was work that suited
him down to the ground. Many on the ranch envied him.
I tried again.
“Woodrow told me that something had
arisen in San Francisco that he needed to take care of, something urgent. He said
he would be alone as quickly as he could.
I pointed to the sky, where a silver disk showed against the
nearly full moon.
“There it is.”
The girls, despite the rudimentary discipline that Hawkins
had been able to instill in them, started talking and some started crying. I
think most of them had not believed in the story of being sent off-world until
that moment. The started looking wildly around, either for an avenue of escape
or to take one last look at the green fields of Earth.
Quietly, without any noise or fuss, the Silver Ship settled
at the top of Priest’s Hill. A rectangle of light appeared where a hatch had
opened into a stairway to the ground. Immediately the crew, dressed in tunics,
some brown, some red, some yellow and blue appeared, dragging capsules, six feet
in length, and about 18 inches in diameter. One side was a silver-grey color,
the other was curved glass. Ther first two men unlocked the first girl from the
front of the kneeling coffle and laid her in the capsule, closing it. They had
the keys to the locks we used; we used the common slaver locks of Ar, which I am
told is a city on Gor. Immediately the girl lapsed into what seemed a deep
sleep. The men guided the capsule, which seemed to float just above the ground,
and into the ship. The second pair did
the same with the second girl.
Hawkins needed his whip to settle down the remaining seventeen
girls on the grass. They had panicked when the first two had disappeared into the
ship.
“Woodrow’s coming.”
He pointed at the headlights of a pick-up truck coming up
the hill. Woodrow arrived just as the last of the capsules was being taken on
board. Hawkins was conferring with the cargo master when I saw two of the crew emerging
from the ship carrying bundles. Two men, one large and one normal sized came
out after them. I had not seen them before; they did not look like crew. The
normal sized one was dressed all in black, but in Earth-style clothes, black
trousers, black shirt, black jacket. The large man, tall and broad, was wearing
blue jeans, a pale yellow shirt, and boots.
The large man waved at Woodrow Frick and addressed him.
“Tal, Oudroe! I have come to visit
you my friend.”
The man in black said nothing. Woodrow Frick just stared at
the large man.
“Scipio Metellus, what are you
doing here? Have you mid-deeds and little schemes caught up to you at last.”
Woodrow Frick did not seem angry, just puzzled. The big man
hung his head just a little.
“Well, maybe, in a matter of
speaking. Can we get out of the cold Maybe something warm to drink?”
“Of course, I will not be remiss in
my hospitality. Tal, my old friend. And who is your travelling companion? And
why?”
The last question was almost hissed. The man in black said
nothing; Scipio Metellus looked a little put out.
“Anders is my friend. He stood by me
when I needed one. He and Atticus of Ar.”
“Let us talk indoors at the ranch.
You can come with me, Scipio Metellus and Anders can travel back to the house
with Hawkins and Smith.”
“Anders should travel with me; he
is my friend.” Scipio Metellus sounded a little less jovial. He was intent on
getting his way.
Woodrow Frick gave way, he led Scipio Metellus and Anders to
his truck. I was very surprised. He did not usually accept anyone disobeying
his instructions.
While we had been taking, the Silver Ship had left. The
quietness of those craft never ceases to astound me. I looked at Hawkins and
shrugged; he shrugged as well. We did not discuss the matter on the way back to
the ranch compound. We knew nothing and there was no need to talk about
nothing. Anders, though reminded me of some men I have known over the years,
silent men, trained by the Company or some foreign counterpart, like MI6. Men
with a license to kill.
When we got back to the ranch, Woodrow ordered some coffee
and sandwiches and some of Wilson’s excellent whiskey. We were served by
Bronwyn, a girl originally from Wales, she had light blonde hair with a just a hint
of red. She was formerly a favorite of Wilson Frick’s but he had mostly withdrawn
from active running of the ranch; his brother Willard’s death had hit him hard.
Bronwyn was aided by two girls from the East who had been sent here after ‘missing
the boat’ to Gor. They were now called Stubby and Flutey. Stubby was short, but
with a large bosom that found much favor.
The three girls withdrew to a corner of the big two-story
room. The large stone fireplace was cold; given the hour was now three o’clock
that wasn’t surprising. What was surprising was that Hawkins and I were not
sent away. Instead Woodrow Frick introduced,
“These are two important men on the
Lazy F, Hawkins, who is in charge of Special Livestock, that is kajirae; and Smith,
who is in charge of weapons, These are Scipio Metellus, a slaver of Ko-ro-ba, a
city whose Home Stone we share, and Anders, of the Black Caste.”
We nodded and no more was said as we ate and drank.
After sipping the coffee, and drinking a large tumbler of
whiskey, Scipio opened the conversation.
“Very lovely House Slaves you have
there, Oudroe. I have always been partial to barbarians.”
“We at House Frick look to provide
the best.”
“I will be frank, Oudroe. I have
been banished from Gor.”
Woodrow raised an eyebrow. He let Scipio continue.
“When I was visiting my friend
Atticus of Ar to collect the proceeds of some slaves he had sold for me, I was
summoned to see the HIgh Initiate of Ar. Summoned by a lean hawk-nosed man in a
white robe. When I reached the Main Temple of Ar this same Initiate met me at a
side door and led me by tortuous passages to a small room. Like a maze it was,
and the whole place stunk of Initiates. To shorten the story, I was not meeting
the High Initiate, but an assistant. It was just the three of us in the small
room. The Deputy High Initiate, the hawk-faced messenger, and me.
They objected to one of my little
schemes.
Woodrow smiled. “Fancy that. Why would one of your plans
upset the High Initiate of Ar?”
Scipio Metellus grimaced.
“I may have become greedy. I was
running a scheme where I would guarantee, with oaths and bonds of money that
pilgrims from a particular city would reach the Sardar Fair safely and get home
safely. I spent a lot of money on guards and the caravans, the first two
anyway, always got back safely.”
Woodrow looked puzzled.
“Why would they trust Scipio
Metellus, Slaver of Ko-ro-ba, with the safety of the caravan?”
“I wouldn’t use the name Scipio
Metellus of course; and I wore a disguise. I would tell the Ladies of the
caravan that to know which Ladies needed special guarding I would have to check
them, privately, without their veils or outer robes. Ladies can be so gullible
when they see a chance to boast of their beauty to their friends.”
“The third convey from any city,
they would let me lead without any bond or promise; by then I was so trusted
that Fathers and Mothers begged me to escort their children. Then on the way
back from the Sardar, I would scoop the lot.”
Woodrow again interrupted.
“But why would the Initiates object?
It is only at the Fair, and for the duration of the Fair, that no violence can be
done, or females enslaved.”
“Well Oudroe, sometimes I got
greedy and impatient. On the early trips, the ones I used to establish my trustworthiness,
sometimes there was a girl or five of surpassing comeliness. So she or they
would be scooped into tarn baskets and bound for markets in the South, while I
gave out that they had been moved to attempt to climb the mountain and join the
Priest-Kings on their mountain.
“The Initiates objected to me
taking just a few girls for myself. I don’t know why, they have no use for women!”
Woodrow asked, “So they banished you to Earth”
“No, I was banished from the
surface of Gor for seven years on pain of Flame Death. Now practically that
means surrendering to go to the Prison Moon, but I sought escape clauses. Frist
I thought about going down the mines, but that meant slavery and likely being
worked to death. Then I thought living in a cave, but I could not trust I had
enough supplies. So Atticus had the idea to seek out Marius the Mariner, who
could sneak me to the Slave Planet where I could hide for seven trips around
the sun.
“So here I am, can you find my
something to do or someplace to go. I have heard of a city named San Francisco.”
Adroitly done, Scipio Metellus, adroitly done, I thought. I
have dealt with many slippery characters in my life; I am one myself. But there
was something false in the mention of San Francisco. There was a tell in your
voice. I don’t know what it is, but you left omitted part of the story there.
You don’t want to live on a ranch for seven years, you are a man of the cities,
but why San Francisco? You are up to something.
Woodrow surprised me then. He turned from Scipio Metellus
and spoke to Hawkins and me.
“There is trouble in San Francisco.
Patrick Masters was shot at tonight. I have been talking to Wyandotte in
Pittsburgh. I want you to go to San Francisco to watch the house while Patrick
is away. Wyandotte wants to talk to him and can’t leave Pittsburgh as the Companionship
Ceremony of my half-sister Chelsea is this weekend.”
Woodrow turned back to Scipio Metellus and Anders. I
expected that Anders with what I took to be his special skills would be sent to
San Francisco with us. But Woodrow surprised me again.
“Scipio, I want you to go to San
Francisco. A friend of the Fricks has been attacked. He is in the midst of
setting up an Acquisition House. He is new to the work, and has been attacked.
I would like you to take over the running of his house until he returns.
“Of course, Oudroe, of course I
will.”
I could see that Scipio Metellus was very glad indeed to
have achieved his end of going to San Francisco. I assumed that Woodrow,
blinded by affection for Scipio and worry about the situation in San Francisco had
missed it. I decided to keep an close eye on this Gorean, this shifty man of
schemes and plans. I would not denounce him to Woodrow, not without proof, but I didn’t trust him.
Woodrow turned to Anders. “We of the Red Caste have little
to do with the Black Caste. I need to have you meet with my Ubar, Wyandotte Frick
before we proceed further with you.”
The man in black showed no upset or emotion, but Scipio
Metellus protested.
“But Oudroe, Anders is my friend. I
vouch for him unreservedly.”
“It is that which has gained Anders
a meeting with Wyandotte. On this matter my mind is made up. Smith and Hawkins,
get some sleep, you leave early in the morning. Scipio and Anders, please stay
here with me, I have things about the political situation to explain to you.”
There are numerous formatting errors in this post. The formatting of this one took over 1.5 hours and fought me all the way. This is the best it is going to get.
ReplyDeleteIn light of the above, comments on formatting, fonts, spelling or spacing will be deleted
DeleteTracker:
Delete(1) I think you forgot grammar and syntax in your list.
(2) How does formatting affect the ability to spell properly?
(3) I’m happy to comment (or not comment) in any way you wish, including making comments on grammar, spelling and syntax via email or delaying such corrections until you want them. Let me know.
(4) I was wondering why there was no post about the absence of The Paga Diaries.
(5) Richard Estey?! Cultivating another new author? Congratulations! I’ll be a lot more critical of the first paragraph than the rest.
(6) First paragraph accurate summation of (1), (2) & (3), except doesn’t Van Rijn have a wide range of interests? Isn’t it more accurate that his lazy counsel, Vansittart, is the patent troll?
(7) I did comment that I wanted Patrick out of the courtroom and see how he handles an unexpected event.
(8) Moving your main Gorean character to Earth and giving him to another writer is unexpected. I imagine it will be interesting to see Scipio adjust to the Drysdale House and Mrs. Magruder’s.
(9) What is your understanding with Emma regarding Chelsea Frick. She was main supporting character in Kajirus and a motivator in Outcast and Barbarian.
(10) Richard Estey did a good job.
(11) I think I recall seeing Marius the Mariner in some fan fiction.
vyeh
The formatting of this post was frustrating because once one thing was changed, old errors that had been corrected in spelling would re-appear. When they were fixed again, the font would change, or the size and scale of certain words.
DeleteMysterious underlinings would appear and disappear.
Things that had been corrected before transferring the text to the blog would change back.
Like Willard Frick and the whole Frick clan, Chelsea was originally imagined by me, then developed by Emma, then I did some more development, then Emma. Very tangled skein
Tracker:
DeleteLOL, A kajira’s can’t serve 2 masters. Wait! Paga slaves do it all the time. Maybe Barbarian hasn’t appeared yet is Kelsee was in Emma’s original notes and is not available for a tearful reunion with Roland …
vyeh
Nicely done, Did not see this coming. look forward to seeing what comes next.
ReplyDeletebtw, I should have No Good Deed Act 4 Unexpected Turn of Events posted later today or tomorrow at the latest
Paladin
Paladin:
ReplyDelete(1) Thank you for the heads up.
(2) I expect the conclusion to Barbarian of Gor because this is the third day after the penultimate chapter. I was checking her site and only looked at Tracker’s site because I was checking Emma’s.
(3) Drysdale, Barbarian conclusion, No Good Deeds Act IV in one day leads to indigestion!
(4) Thanks for the hint!
vyeh
Thank you for including my contribution. I may have more in the future. Nice interesting plot twists
ReplyDeleteUnknown:
Delete(1) Tracker outed you, Unknown, or you outed yourself when you thanked Tracker.
(2) Would you care to specify your contribution? Since you commented about the plot twists, I assumed they were supplied by Tracker.
vyeh
Richard wrote everything from the end of the italicized paragraph, until the section on the ranch with Scipio Metellus and Anders. Scipio's entry into Patrick's story was always contemplated'; I wanted to establish the character first.
DeleteMore twists to come of course.
Tracker:
DeleteSo you wrote the text with Smith POV?
vyeh
I wrote the Smith POV; Richard wrote the Patrick POV
DeleteI sent Tracker the chapter about the attack on Patrick and Juli. Hele was kind enough to incorporate it in this chapter
ReplyDeleteThe inclusion of Scipio Metasllus is from Tracket
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ReplyDeleteI wrote in (7) I wanted to see Patrick out of the courtroom dealing with an unexpected crisis, You did that! Thank you!
vyeh
Interesting twist of bringing Scipio Metellus to Earth. Wasn't expecting that. Please everyone, it's difficult enough creating a story. One can do the best one can about grammar, spelling, and formatting, but one can never get it perfect. Sometimes it's better that it isn't perfect. It shows that it's written by a human being, not a machine. Constructive comments, yes please, but please don't be pedantic.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with you on the editing part. I know that I like to write what I see and hear play out in My head. So the grammar is not perfect. I am constantly fighting with autocorrect for spelling and grammar. My spelling can be horrible at times but have to go back to the old school way of grabbing My old faithful copy of Websters to look things up when I can't get it close enough for spell check to give me the right option . lol
DeleteAnd don't get Me started on the grammar check with the little highlights that something needs to be corrected. The vast majority of the time, what the program says I should have instead of what I have written are polar opposites or doesn't make sense when I read it back.
I had someone back when I was just really getting My stride posting on here offer to proof read My stuff and make corrections for Me. I politely declined because I felt I had written it how I wished the reader to read it.
I love to hear back if people liked or didn't like something in the story, Or their thoughts on where it might or might not be going. It's sort of like years ago I heard to renowned film critics review of a movie ( for the record I usually don't follow review by so-called professionals as they are mostly hot air and BS) But they were trashing the newest version of Around the World in 80 Days with Jackie Chan. I loved the movie they hated so much. Why? because it was escapism pure and simple. Something intended for you to sit back and laugh while forgetting the problems and worries of the world. It was a collaboration of Jackie Chan and Disney intended to be fun and light hearted. If wanted serious then I would have watched the classic with Sir David Nevin or read the book.
By the way, I am still working on your latest story between real time and working on My own. But great work keep it up
Paladin
Exciting chapter with twists that can take us anywhere! You have written about the Initiates a couple times and I appreciate and encourage more of it . J Norman’s characters always had a disdain for them and you are reflecting that. In JN’s books he he mentions them once in a while but never really elaborates on their beliefs, doctrine, dealings, etc. They are mysterious and maybe JN intended it that way.
ReplyDeleteFor the planet to have one religion is unique. How do the Initiates operate and do they have ANY relations with Priest Kings ( no?). What is their real purpose if they know there is no relationship with PK’s. Maybe only the top rung of Priests really know their religion is a sham. Is there concern for an afterlife on a planet where people live for generations?
Emma took liberty with Valhalla recently. Does JN mention Valhalla in the Torlsvald areas, I can’t remember?
Writing a story called Initiate of Gor intrigues me. But to make it interesting and exciting would be very challenging.
Scipio is going to be a tyrant at Drysdale! But he is a wolf amongst sheep with all of the women in San Francisco. How long will it take for his first enslavement?
Scipio is going to be very interesting at Drysdale House, I hope. After the current arc of Drysdale House ends, about 7-10 chapters away, it will become an occasional episode with most of the emplaysis going to ***** of Gor and Anthropologists of Gor.
DeleteTracker:
Delete(1) If ***** is covering up a bad word, then I eagerly anticipate Bitch of Gor, about the enslavement of Cruella de Vil.
vyeh
good one vyeh!
DeleteIt is to avoid spoilers as the character(s) will be debut in Drysdale House before getting their own story!