Verna’s Journey
Pauline Anne Armitage
Chapter Two The Tarncot
I
awake feeling bleary-eyed. I stagger to
my feet. Vika lies on the floor
sleeping peaceably. I reach for the twin
triangles of tabuk[1] hide
joined at each point and step into it, so as to cover my lower torso. I tighten the top at my waist with the
adjusting thong. Vika stirs. Realising that I’m awake and standing over
her, she scurries to bow her head before me in obeisance.
“Ten thousand pardons, Ubara. I slept while you were awake!”
“Silence Vika. My head hurts from too much wine. Please, just give me my clothes.”
Vika rises and helps me
into my boots and jerkin. She’s done a
good job. My garments have not been this
soft ever, not even when the hides were newly cured. I should thank her, but I don’t really feel
too well. Besides she’s a slave. Thanks are not expected by her. I retrieve my weapons and head off seeking
some verr[2] milk to
quench a parched throat. I manage a bowl
of thick sullage[3] along
with the milk. I begin to ‘come
round’. I’m still not at my best
when Callius and Arminias enter the
hall. They have already eaten.
“If you are ready, Ubara? It’s time for you to learn to fly a Tarn.”
I’m
not, but I can’t really put this off. Arminias’ voice has the
tone of an executioner. I get up and
follow the two of them to the Tarn cot. On the way, we pass the store of the
quartermaster. He finds me fur-lined
riding-leathers and boots. Such are
necessary as it is colder in the sky than at the ground. It gets colder the higher one goes. The leathers and boots are just a bit too
big, but they are the smallest he has.
When I get to Ar, I’ll have some made
to fit.
Arminius
greets the tarn-keeper. The tarn-keeper. has an air
about him, of ‘Why am I bothering’. He
just knows that a tarn is going to kill me
today. He’s just going through the
motions, giving the barest minimum of information. He leads us to a bench over which is thrown a
tarn saddle and throat
strap.
“You mount with the
mounting ladder...”
The
tarn-keeper. indicates.
“You make sure that you
fasten the safety belts so that you can’t fall off.”
The
tarn-keeper. goes to the
throat strap.
“This fastens round the Tarn’s neck, The six straps or reins are numbered
clockwise, one-strap being at the top.
To control direction you pull on the strap or straps closest to the
direction you wish to go. One-strap for
up, two and three for right, five and six for left. Four to go down or
land. To slow the tarn down, you pull on
all the straps equally. A quick flick of
all the straps together tell the tarn to speed up. Alternatively you can use the Tarn goad to encourage a
faster pace.”
The
tarn-keeper. takes just
such a device from his belt.
“Hold out your hand.”
I
do so. He slaps the goad into my hand
pressing the activation button. There
are sparks and a searing pain in my hand.
“The Tarn-goad is not a
weapon or a toy. Treat it with respect!”
Feeling
is coming back into my hand.
“If you want the bird to
hunt for food, whether you are in the saddle or not, use the word ‘Tabuk’”
I
nod.
“This is a Tarn-whistle. Each Tarn responds only to
the tone of its own whistle. You summon
the Tarn with the
whistle. Don’t lose the whistle. Lose the whistle and effectively you lose
your bird! You’ll get yours when a
suitable Tarn is allocated.. The Tarn can hear the
whistle up to ten pasangs[4]
away. That’s about it really. Let’s find you a Tarn.”
I
resolve to thread the whistle onto the thong that holds the Ubara signet.
We stand on the floor of the Tarn cot by the big open
flight-exit, looking up at the birds.
Most are quiet, but there’s a big red-plumed one fluttering its wings
and squawking on a perch high up and back.
Arminias talks to the tarn-keeper.
“Do you have something
relatively safe and docile…?”
“No!”
I
surprise myself! I know! I just know which bird I want!
“I’ll take that one.”
I
point up at the big red fractious Tarn. The tarn-keeper is
horrified.
“Lady!…”
He
doesn’t know that I’m nominally the Ubara.
“...The big red female
is barely trained. It’ll kill you! It’s badly injured one keeper who tried to
saddle it! It’s unstable. It won’t settle down!”
“Let it kill me! As I said to the Commander, I’m not afraid of
death.”
I
hear him mutter to himself. I think his
comment is ‘mad fool!’
“So be it, Lady. Your funeral...”
The
tarn-keeper. calls an
order to a subordinate. The perch is
unhooked from the cot wall and lowered with a pulley arrangement so that it
drops onto a cart. The bird on its cart
is pushed towards us. It’s still beating
its wings and squawking. I find the bird
to be beautiful. If I am to die, let it
be at the beak of such a bird as this! I
am told later that to Tarnsmen, death by Tarn is not considered a
dishonourable death. I call to the
second keeper, the one who’d brought the bird down.
“Free her!”
The
man unhooks the bird’s tether.
I step forward. I
hear Arminias and the tarn-keeper. step back
as fast as they can. I hear the word
‘Crazy!’ I look the Tarn in the eye.
“Greetings Sister of the Wind! Let us be one! Let us ride the wind together!”
The
bird leaps forward! It stops just short
of me. Its beak only inches from my
face. It opens its beak and issues a
scream that temporarily deafens me. I
feel the wind thrust from its mighty lungs and drops of spittle sprinkle my
face. I make no attempt to move. I do not flinch in the slightest, not out of
belligerence, but because somehow I know that the bird will not harm me. I am its sister, its counterpart, its other
half. How I know this I don’t know The long scream ends. The Tarn steps back in
puzzlement. There’s another look in its
eye now. Recognition.
“Come Sister! Let us feel the wind beneath our wings. Let us soar into the sky!”
I
reach for the saddle and throat strap. I
climb the saddling block on the cart. ‘Sister of the Wind’
perches quietly and still as I fasten the saddle and controlling straps. I hear from behind me awed voices. ‘She’s a Tarnsman!’ ‘A woman Tarnsman!’ ‘A Tarnswoman!’ ‘I never thought I’d see the day!’. I am satisfied that the harnessing is secure
and not harming the Tarn. I turn to the tarn-keeper.
“Whistle!”
He
steps forward his jaw hanging slackly.
He presses the Tarn-whistle and a goad
into my hand. I fasten the whistle
securely into a pocket of my riding leathers for now, and the goad to my wrist
by its leather loop. I’ve no intention
of ever using the goad unless I have to.
This Tarn is too precious for
such brutality! I lead the Tarn to the edge of the
platform. I climb the ladder to the
saddle and strap myself into the saddle.
“Fly, my Sister! Fly!”
I
pull on the one-strap. We are in the
air. My stomach with the remains of last
night’s wine feels left behind on the platform.
A strange feeling! My stomach
catches up to me. I am in ecstasy. I am Mistress of the
World! Up here, it’s like I’m a Goddess. I climb higher still.
Arminias having
collected his own Tarn joins me. He shouts out to me.
“Beware of hubris! You are not a Goddess! Control the Tarn! Keep your head and your wits under
control! Daydreaming is dangerous to you
and the Tarn.”
How
does he know what I am feeling? Was his
first flight so gorgeous? Did he feel
like a God on his first flight? I wake
up to reality and answer.
“Got your point, Arminias!”
“Now follow me. Do what I do, make your Tarn conform to what
mine is doing.”
Arminias leads me
through a series of manoeuvres designed to test and increase my skill at
controlling the Tarn. We fly together for an hour or more before Arminias leads us back
to the Tarn cot. I land the Tarn and encourage it to
it’s previous perch. Sister of the Wind is no
loner fractious. Arminias approaches, a
huge grin on his face. I see beyond him Grippus and Callius with huge smiles
also. Arminias grabs me and
hugs me. I’m amazed that I let him get
so close without drawing my knife! The
hug is not one of desire, but of fraternal greeting. He releases me.
“See that your Tarn is fed. Get some food. Do what you need to. We leave for Ar, in an Ahn.”
There
is much cheering and breast-thump salutes as we leave the cot. Even the few slaves outdoors shriek with
admiration.
At the 11th Ahn[5] Arminias, Callius and I are
ready. Our Tarns carry saddlebags with
our limited belongings in them. Our
weapons are strapped to the saddle where we can easily get them in case we need
them. The rest of the garrison, or so it
seems is there to see us off. Grippus steps forward.
“Fly with the wind, Ubara. When you return, call and visit.”
“We cannot see where
time takes us, but if I’m back this way, then yes. I’ve still get lots of your wine to drink!”
Grippus snorts a
laugh. The three of us climb on our
Tarns and rise off the platform. Callius leads. Apparently he’s more familiar with the route
than Arminias.
Pauline Anne Armitage:
ReplyDelete(1) I looked forward to this story for a week and I loved it. This chapter could stand alone as a short story.
(2) I love the way you’re developing Verna. She chose the best, although most wildest, tarn. She returned to the Northern Forrest rather than accompany Marlenus to Ar as his consort. She reminds me of Tarl Cabot and Sister of the Winds, a nicely chosen name, reminds me of Ubar of the Skies, Tarl’s tarn. She is a once in a generation individual.
(3) I love the first paragraph. She is hungover. She doesn’t drink in the wild. When Vika apologizes for sleeping, Verna shuts Vika up. For making her garment skins soft, Verna thinks, “I should thank her, but I don’t really feel too well. Besides she’s a slave. Thanks are not expected by her.” In three sentences, you encapsulated Verna’s exceptional attitude toward kajira, her hangover and the general attitude toward slaves.
(4) I love the way Arminias and the tarn-keeper go from expecting Verna to be tarn kill to their awe when she saddles Sister of the Wind. From: “Arminias” voice has the tone of an executioner. … The tarn-keeper … just knows that a tarn is going to kill [Verna] today. ‘Lady! … The big red female [will] kill you! … Your funeral …’” To “awed voices[:] ‘She’s a Tarnsman!’ ‘A woman Tarnsman!’ ‘A Tarnswoman!’ ‘I’d never thought I’d see the day!’”
(5) You reduce Verna’s maiden flight after her initial elation to a couple of sentences and the reactions of Arminius, Grippius and Callius to “a huge grin [and] huge smiles.” I like your choice to economize. Arizona Wanderer spent a whole chapter describing a tarn race. You focus on Verna’s emotional reaction and touch briefly on her flight and the emotional reaction of the onlookers. Both your choice and Arizona Wanderer’s choice made sense in context.
(6) I like Verna’s thoughts: “Arminius grabs me and hugs me. I’m amazed that I let him get so close without drawing my knife! The hug is not one of desire, but of fraternal greeting. He releases me.” In four sentences, you’ve encapsulate Verna’s attitude toward men and Arminius’ attitude. She is no natural slave desiring the touch of a man. He doesn’t see her as a woman.
(7) Verna leaves the fortress with the garrison to see her off. She has won their respect and admiration. Your story explains logically how she has become Ubara in their hearts.
(8) I came to Emma’s site looking for Gor stories. I wasn’t happy with the preview of John Norman’s Treasure of Gor. I love Olga Turlovna’s Daughter of Gor and Emma’s original trilogy, Mistress of Gor, Harem Slave of Gor and Panther Girl of Gor. I love your two chapters, although you have the advantage that I’m familiar with Verna’s back story and the Gorean saga. I like your dialog and the description of the character’s’ emotional state.
(9) You’ve set your story up for a Verna becoming Marlenus’ warrior Ubara, combining the roles of consort and sword sister. You can either write a story of courtship, a story of Verna’s developing relationship with Sister of the Winds — Verna said in the first chapter, “The last two years alone … has been very hard” — or a story of war. I’d like to see Verna become a better Tharna.
vyeh
Good Chapter, I have to admit that when she was drinking heavy and feeling the affects, combined with all the comments about the earrings, brand showing and such. I was almost willing to bet rather that fight her they let the wine take care of her and when she woke the next morning she would be collared and chained.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to seeing where this go
Paladin
Paladin:
DeleteExcept Verna has the Ubara’s signet and Grippus remembered her from Marlenus’ expedition two years ago. No one wants to face Marlenus’ wrath when he inevitably finds out how his word was disrespected.
vyeh
Tracker:
ReplyDeleteThe formatting for Chapter Two is a big improvement over the formatting for Chapter One and improves the readability. I noticed that when I reread Chapter One and left a comment there in light of Chapter Two.
vyeh
Formatting and layout are a little tricky on this platform, and is something I am still working on. Both these Chapters came from the exact same file (Pauline provides me the whole story at once). I am still working on selecting the options which work best as to presentation. It is a learning process.
DeleteTracker:
DeleteEmma complained about formatting. The footnotes look too spaced out with a blank line between each. I like the blank line between paragraphs. The indentation for quotes only works well for large blocks, e.g. when the tarn-keeper gives instructions for using the throat strap. Despite the criticism about the footnotes and the quotes, the use of spaces in Chapter Two is a big improvement over the huge blocks of text in Chapter One.
vyeh
I enjoyed the tarn training and the details of the strap instructions by number. I have done some research into tarns for my own writing and always wondered on the distance that the whistle worked. Good to know it is 10 pasangs , even though it seems quite far .
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